List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and avoid unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a grocery list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. Moreover, it prevents me from forgetting important items and saves time while shopping.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide supporting details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: I don't currently make lists for work because I have just completed my MBA and am staying at home. However, when I do have tasks, I prefer to organize them using a to-do list to stay productive.

제안: Your answer repeats the same idea and lacks clarity. Try to explain reasons why some people dislike making lists, using linking words and specific examples to enrich your response.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to shop spontaneously. Additionally, they might feel that lists restrict their choices and reduce flexibility.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly whether you prefer paper or phone lists, and provide reasons with clear sentences and linking words.

예시: Although I have not made many lists myself, I prefer using paper lists because they are easy to write and carry. For example, my mother often writes shopping lists on paper, which I find very convenient.

× Yes, I do make a list. Of. Groceries when I go for shopping. This helps. To to buy. The things. Without forgetting and also it is very easy to.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of groceries when I go shopping. This helps me to buy the things without forgetting, and also it is very easy.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary full stops, which disrupt the sentence flow. Combining the fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't go for a work.

✓ I don't go to work.

The phrase 'go for a work' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'work' in this context is 'to', so it should be 'go to work'.

× I just completed my MBA program and I I'm just staying home.

✓ I have just completed my MBA program and I am just staying at home.

The sentence has a repetition error ('I I'm') and lacks the auxiliary verb 'have' for the present perfect tense. Also, 'staying home' is better expressed as 'staying at home' for clarity.

× I don't go for a work, but at at at free time.

✓ I don't go to work, but in my free time,

Again, 'go for a work' should be 'go to work'. Also, 'at free time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' for 'in my free time'.

× I don't organize work. I just.

✓ I don't organize work; I just relax.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or complement after 'I just'. Adding a verb like 'relax' completes the thought.

× By making. Lists. People don't forget things which they are about to buy and also they do not. They don't buy unnecessary things. By making. Lists.

✓ By making lists, people don't forget the things they are about to buy, and also they don't buy unnecessary things.

The original sentence is fragmented and has unnecessary full stops. Also, 'which they are about to buy' is better expressed as 'the things they are about to buy'. Combining the fragments and correcting the structure improves clarity.

× I am not. Made any list so far in my life but I have seen my mom making lists by writing in a paper in a sheet of paper and and also she has told me to make her list.

✓ I have not made any list so far in my life, but I have seen my mom making lists by writing on a sheet of paper, and she has also told me to make her list.

The phrase 'made any list' should be in present perfect tense 'have not made'. Also, 'writing in a paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on a sheet of paper'. The sentence is also fragmented and needs to be combined properly.

× And I am also done it in a paper.

✓ And I have also done it on paper.

The phrase 'I am also done it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have also done it'. Also, 'in a paper' should be 'on paper'.