List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như: "No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need."

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách công việc, ví dụ: "Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and be more flexible with my tasks."

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and be more flexible with my tasks.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc, ví dụ: "Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming."

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ: "I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily see them when I wake up or when I am at work or studying."

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily see them when I wake up or when I am at work or studying.

× I think is making list when I shop is like a headache and it's like not conveniently.

✓ I think making a list when I shop is like a headache and it's not convenient.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'is making'. Also, 'conveniently' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'convenient' is needed to describe the situation. Use 'it is' and 'convenient' for correct grammar.

× I think is when I go to shop I see what I need and I buy them.

✓ I think when I go shopping I see what I need and I buy it.

The phrase 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to express the activity. Also, 'them' refers to plural, but 'what I need' may be singular or plural; to be safe, 'it' is better if referring to a singular item or 'them' if plural. Here, 'it' fits better for clarity.

× Is helpful for me and Kayla make the work more modern and like. Flexible.

✓ It is helpful for me and Kayla to make the work more modern and flexible.

The sentence lacks the subject 'It' before 'is helpful'. Also, 'make' needs 'to' to form the infinitive 'to make'. The word 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× I think now city people down line making less because The thing is.

✓ I think now city people are making less because the thing is.

The phrase 'down line making less' is unclear and likely incorrect. Assuming the intended meaning is 'are making less', the verb 'are' is needed for plural subject 'people'. Also, 'The' should be lowercase 'the'.

× Are inconvenient.

✓ They are inconvenient.

The sentence lacks a subject. 'Are inconvenient' is incomplete; it needs a subject like 'They' to be grammatically correct.

× And also there is. Make a lot of fat for them.

✓ And also, it makes a lot of trouble for them.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'There is' is incomplete and 'Make a lot of fat' is incorrect. Likely intended meaning is 'it makes a lot of trouble' or 'it causes problems'.

× Like I had a heart to try.

✓ Like I had a hard time trying.

The phrase 'had a heart to try' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'had a hard time trying' to indicate difficulty.

× I prefer like a list on paper because.

✓ I prefer a list on paper because.

The word 'like' is unnecessary here and should be removed. 'Prefer' is directly followed by the object.

× When I try to write it and make it on the French when on the morning I wake up and additionally when I go to work or study, I note them on the book or the wall to see easier more.

✓ When I try to write it and make it in French, in the morning when I wake up, and additionally when I go to work or study, I note them in the book or on the wall to see more easily.

The sentence is long and confusing. 'On the French' should be 'in French'. 'On the morning' should be 'in the morning'. 'To see easier more' should be 'to see more easily'. Prepositions 'in' and 'on' are corrected for proper usage.