List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확하며, 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성하며, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 보세요. 예를 들어, 쇼핑 리스트가 어떻게 편리함과 효율성을 높이는지 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and saves time by preventing unnecessary purchases.

제안: 문장이 불완전하고 어색합니다. 리스트를 만드는 이유와 그 효과를 명확하게 설명하는 문장을 연습하세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어가면 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks more efficiently.

제안: 답변이 불명확하고 문법적 오류가 많아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 사람들이 리스트 작성에 대해 느끼는 부정적인 점을 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결해 보세요.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and can be too restrictive.

제안: 답변이 부분적으로 이해되지만, 문법과 어휘 사용이 부정확합니다. 휴대폰 리스트의 장점을 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more efficient and convenient than paper. Also, it offers more flexibility to edit or add items anytime.

× Definitely yes. All the plan.

✓ Definitely yes. I make a plan.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb, making it incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I make a plan' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Oh, when I. Purchase help to my. Convenience no more carrier comedians and also. Efficiant buying.

✓ Oh, when I purchase, it helps my convenience with no more carrying bags and also efficient buying.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to form a complete sentence with proper subject, verb, and object to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I'm making a list when I work.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I work.

The question asks about a habitual action, so the simple present tense 'I make' is appropriate instead of the present continuous 'I'm making' which indicates an action happening now.

× It's helped to more officiants way. N.

✓ It helps me work more efficiently.

The original sentence uses incorrect word forms and structure. 'Helped to more officiants way' is incorrect; 'helps me work more efficiently' correctly uses the adverb 'efficiently' to describe how the work is done.

× The reason? Is. Because making a plan is quietly limited.

✓ The reason is that making a plan is quite limiting.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'quietly' instead of 'quite'. The corrected sentence combines the fragments and uses the correct adverb 'quite' to modify 'limiting'.

× And sometime. Bring a stereo types.

✓ And sometimes it brings stereotypes.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'sometime' instead of 'sometimes'. Also, 'bring a stereo types' is incorrect; it should be 'it brings stereotypes' to form a complete sentence.

× So it's making more people regulations an.

✓ So it creates more regulations for people.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper sentence structure.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it is more efficient and convenient rather than. Paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more efficient and convenient than paper.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb. Also, 'rather than' is better replaced with 'than' in this comparative structure.

× And also. **** fun is I can out there more flex. Flexibility's.

✓ Also, the fun part is that I can have more flexibility.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a complete sentence with proper structure and word choice.