List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ не совсем естественный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильные предлоги и структуру предложения, а также избегать избыточности. Попробуйте сформулировать ответ более естественно и кратко, например, "Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember what I need."

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember what I need to buy.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре, а также неясен. Следует использовать правильные предлоги и более чётко выражать мысль. Например, "Yes, I make a to-do list for work, and it helps me stay organized."

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list for work, and it helps me stay organized.

제안: Ответ неполный и содержит непонятные слова. Нужно дать полное предложение с объяснением причины, используя связующие слова. Например, "I think some people don't like making lists because they don't have enough time or find it unnecessary."

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they don't have enough time or find it unnecessary.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не очень логичен. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и связующие слова. Например, "I prefer making lists on paper because I can correct them quickly, and I enjoy writing by hand."

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can correct them quickly, and I enjoy writing by hand.

× Yes, when I go to shopping I make at least what I need to buy.

✓ Yes, when I go shopping I make at least what I need to buy.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the verb in the '-ing' form without 'to'. The correct form is 'go shopping'. This is a common error with verbs of movement followed by activities.

× Yes, I make at least for a work and of course it works.

✓ Yes, I make at least for work and of course it works.

The phrase 'for a work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun here and does not require the article 'a'. Also, 'for work' is the correct prepositional phrase. Using 'a' before uncountable nouns is a common mistake.

× I think because they. John, have time for it.

✓ I think it's because they don't have time for it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a proper verb and subject connection. The corrected sentence adds 'it's' and 'don't' to form a complete and meaningful sentence. Proper sentence structure requires a subject and predicate.

× I prefer make, at least on paper becauses I can correct it faster and I like writing. In the paper.

✓ I prefer to make lists, at least on paper because I can correct it faster and I like writing on paper.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the infinitive form 'to make' or gerund 'making', but 'prefer make' is incorrect. Also, 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. The phrase 'in the paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.