List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir İngilizce kullanarak, cümlenizi daha açık ve etkili hale getirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız.

예시: I usually don't make a shopping list, but I realize I should because I often forget essential items. Therefore, I definitely need to start making lists before shopping.

제안: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. Daha net ve akıcı ifadeler kullanarak, düşüncelerinizi daha iyi ifade edebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları doğru kullanmaya dikkat edin.

예시: Generally, I make lists for my work or study plans because I like to stay organized. It helps me keep track of my tasks easily, so it definitely works well for me.

제안: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hataları mevcut. Daha doğru ve doğal ifadeler kullanarak, fikrinizi daha açık ve ikna edici şekilde sunmalısınız.

예시: I think it depends on personality because some people are too lazy to make lists or stay organized, and they may not know how to manage their time effectively.

제안: Cümlenizde birçok dilbilgisi hatası ve anlamsal bozukluk var. Daha düzgün cümle yapıları ve uygun kelime kullanımı ile cevabınızı geliştirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

예시: To be honest, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's small, convenient, and more useful than paper lists. I often lose paper lists, but my phone is always with me and easy to access.

× I love stay organized and it is more beneficial.

✓ I love staying organized and it is more beneficial.

After the verb 'love', the gerund form (verb + -ing) should be used to indicate the activity one enjoys. Therefore, 'stay' should be corrected to 'staying'.

× Ann, this is really easy to check my list for my work, so it's definitely work for me.

✓ And, this is really easy to check my list for my work, so it definitely works for me.

The modal verb 'does' is implied in the phrase 'it definitely works for me'. The verb 'work' should be in third person singular present tense 'works' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'Ann' seems to be a typo for 'And'.

× I supposed to it's depend on the personality because some individuals are really lazy to make a list or stay organized and they don't know how to spend their time more effectively.

✓ I suppose it depends on the personality because some individuals are really lazy to make a list or stay organized and they don't know how to spend their time more effectively.

The phrase 'I supposed to' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I suppose'. Also, 'it's depend' should be 'it depends' to match subject-verb agreement in present tense.

× To be honest, I prefer make a list on my phone because it's small, easy and more useful than make list on paper.

✓ To be honest, I prefer making a list on my phone because it's small, easy, and more useful than making a list on paper.

After the verb 'prefer', the gerund form (verb + -ing) should be used. Therefore, 'make' should be corrected to 'making'. Also, 'make list' should be 'making a list' for grammatical correctness.

× Because I can lost the paper an.

✓ Because I can lose the paper.

The verb 'lost' is past tense; the correct form here is the base form 'lose' after 'can'. Also, 'an' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed.

× But if it's my phone, it's more useful and it is more access is easily.

✓ But if it's my phone, it's more useful and it is more accessible easily.

The phrase 'more access is easily' is incorrect. The adjective 'accessible' should be used instead of 'access', and 'easily' is the correct adverb to describe the ease of access.