List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không chính xác, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tốt hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. This way, I can save money and keep my house organized.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh nói lắp và thiếu liên kết. Hãy giải thích rõ ràng hơn về lý do bạn không thích làm danh sách và cách bạn quản lý công việc của mình.

예시: Actually, I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to follow my own schedule and prioritize tasks based on their importance.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản.

예시: There are several reasons why some people don't like making lists. Firstly, they might be lazy and find it tedious. Secondly, they may not have enough time to prepare a list.

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and efficient. I can easily add or remove items, and I always have my phone with me.

× Yes, I usually make a list when a shop because it helps me avoiding W some quest Tom.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me avoid some questions.

The verb 'help' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'avoid', not the gerund 'avoiding'. Also, 'a shop' is incorrect; it should be 'I shop'. The phrase 'W some quest Tom' seems to be a transcription error and is corrected to 'some questions'.

× Yes, I usually make a list when a shop because it helps me avoiding W some quest Tom.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me avoid some questions.

The pronoun 'a' is incorrectly used instead of 'I' as the subject of the verb 'shop'. The subject pronoun 'I' is required here.

× You know, like. I don't want to bring unnecessary items. Into my house.

✓ You know, like, I don't want to bring unnecessary items into my house.

The sentence is fragmented incorrectly with periods; it should be combined into one sentence with proper commas to maintain flow and clarity.

× So I just Lee. Make a list.

✓ So I just really make a list.

The word 'Lee' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'really'. Correct pronoun and adverb usage is necessary for clarity.

× I surely I don't usually. Like to make a list.

✓ Surely, I don't usually like to make a list.

The pronoun 'I' is repeated unnecessarily and the sentence structure is awkward. Correct placement of adverbs and pronouns improves clarity.

× The reason is. I'll I follow my own schedule an. Priority is it.

✓ The reason is I follow my own schedule and prioritize it.

The sentence is fragmented and contains errors in verb forms and conjunctions. It should be a single coherent sentence with correct verb forms.

× You know, like. I think is more import.

✓ You know, like, I think it is more important.

The adjective 'important' was truncated to 'import' and the subject 'it' was missing. Correct adjective form and subject inclusion are necessary.

× There are many reasons. That people don't like making lists.

✓ There are many reasons that people don't like making lists.

The sentence is mostly correct but the period after 'reasons' is unnecessary and breaks the sentence unnaturally.

× The first reason is they lazy.

✓ The first reason is they are lazy.

The adjective 'lazy' needs a linking verb 'are' to form a correct predicate adjective structure.

× They don't really like to make list.

✓ They don't really like to make lists.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the plural subject 'they' and the general meaning.

× The second reason is. They don't have time to make a list.

✓ The second reason is they don't have time to make a list.

The period after 'is' is unnecessary and breaks the sentence unnaturally.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because is more convenient and effectively I can write write the Dow an it is racism very easy.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and effective; I can write down and it is really very easy.

The pronoun 'is' lacks a subject 'it'. The adverb 'effectively' should be the adjective 'effective' to describe convenience. 'write write the Dow an it is racism' appears to be transcription errors corrected to 'write down and it is really'. 'racism' is a mishearing of 'really'.

× So that's why I like you my phone more.

✓ So that's why I like my phone more.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly inserted and should be removed for correct sentence structure.