List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as "barmasse my products" and "It has me or not to forget." To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need. This way, I don't forget anything important. Also, it makes the shopping process more organized and efficient.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical mistakes and repetition ("meetings, meetings"). To improve, avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words like "for example" appropriately and ensure your sentences are concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. I start by listing my appointments, meetings, and other tasks. For example, this helps me stay focused and ensures I never miss important deadlines.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like "uh" and unclear references like "OSHA." To improve, give a clear opinion with reasons and use correct grammar. Try to provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it or they trust their memory to remember tasks. Also, some may find lists time-consuming or unnecessary.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide a clear, concise answer within 5 sentences.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because they are easy to save and less likely to be lost. For example, paper lists can be misplaced or damaged by bad weather, but digital lists are more secure and convenient.

× Yes I make list when I go out for shopping because that way it has me not to memorize all the items and and easily barmasse my products apart from this.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go out shopping because that way it helps me not to memorize all the items and easily organise my products. Apart from this,

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'go out for shopping' is better expressed as 'go out shopping'. The phrase 'it has me not to memorize' is incorrect; 'it helps me not to memorize' is correct. 'barmasse' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; 'organise' fits the context better.

× and and easily barmasse my products apart from this.

✓ and easily organise my products. Apart from this,

The repeated 'and' is redundant and should be removed. Also, 'apart from this' should start a new sentence or be connected properly.

× It has me or not to forget forget anything important.

✓ It helps me not to forget anything important.

The phrase 'It has me or not to forget' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'It helps me not to forget'. Also, the repeated 'forget' is an error.

× I can also has to make my shopping process.

✓ I can also make my shopping process easier.

'I can also has to make' is grammatically incorrect. 'Can' is a modal verb and should be followed by the base form 'make'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'easier' clarifies the meaning.

× I I always start my day by making the list of the daily activity which I have to perform at my work.

✓ I always start my day by making a list of the daily activities which I have to perform at my work.

'The list' should be 'a list' as it is the first mention. 'Daily activity' should be plural 'daily activities' to match the context.

× For example, making up a list of appointments, meetings, meetings and other tasks help me to stay focus and never miss the important deadlines.

✓ For example, making a list of appointments, meetings, and other tasks helps me to stay focused and never miss important deadlines.

'Making up a list' is better as 'making a list'. 'Meetings' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'making a list'. 'Stay focus' should be 'stay focused'. 'The important deadlines' can be 'important deadlines' unless specific deadlines are meant.

× I I think so. I think they're not used to making the list.

✓ I think so. I think they're not used to making lists.

'Making the list' should be 'making lists' to generalize the activity.

× OSHA maybe they have a good memory that's why they didn't.

✓ Maybe they have a good memory; that's why they don't.

'OSHA' seems to be a typo and is removed. 'They didn't' is incomplete and unclear; 'they don't' fits better to indicate present habit.

× Uh, some people doesn't like to make list.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists.

'Doesn't' is incorrect for plural subject 'people'; it should be 'don't'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists'.

× I prefer to make this turn my mobile phone because that way I can save save and.

✓ I prefer to make this on my mobile phone because that way I can save it, and

'Make this turn my mobile phone' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'make this on my mobile phone'. 'Save save and' is repetitive and incomplete; corrected to 'save it, and'.

× And there is a less risk of being lost.

✓ And there is less risk of it being lost.

'A less risk' is incorrect; 'less risk' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'of being lost' should be 'of it being lost' for clarity.

× For example if I make a list on paper, there is more sources of being misplaced or being damaged due to bad weather condition.

✓ For example, if I make a list on paper, there are more chances of it being misplaced or damaged due to bad weather conditions.

'More sources of being misplaced' is incorrect; 'more chances of it being misplaced' is correct. 'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'chances'. 'Bad weather condition' should be plural 'conditions'.