List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using simpler sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items."

예시: I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

제안: Focus on clarity and grammatical accuracy. Use linking words like "because" and "so" properly, and avoid awkward phrasing. For example, "Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and remember everything, so I rarely forget anything."

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and remember everything, so I rarely forget anything.

제안: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary to sound more natural. For example, "Some people have a good memory and don't forget things easily. Also, they may feel making lists wastes time, so they prefer not to use them."

예시: Some people have a good memory and don't forget things easily. Also, they may feel making lists wastes time, so they prefer not to use them.

제안: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use concise and clear sentences. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry and I always use the notes app to prepare them."

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry and I always use the notes app to prepare them.

× Yes, I always prefer to make a list when I go for a shopping because it is the convenient way to remember the things and also as saver me to buy unnecessary things.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it is a convenient way to remember things and also saves me from buying unnecessary things.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct expression without an article. 'The convenient way' should be 'a convenient way' because it is one of many ways. 'The things' should be 'things' as it is a general statement. 'As saver me' is incorrect; it should be 'saves me' to correctly express the action.

× Yes, I always prefer to make a list when I go for a shopping because it is the convenient way to remember the things and also as saver me to buy unnecessary things.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it is a convenient way to remember things and also saves me from buying unnecessary things.

The preposition 'for' before 'shopping' is unnecessary and incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Also, 'saver me to buy' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'saves me from buying'.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work and it always works because it is the best way to organize my things easily. As well as this, it is the best way to remember all the things. With the help of this I am it is a very low chance to forget anything.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it always works because it is the best way to organize my things easily. Also, it is the best way to remember everything. With its help, there is a very low chance of forgetting anything.

'As well as this' is awkward; 'Also' is more natural. 'All the things' should be 'everything' for generalization. 'With the help of this I am it is a very low chance' is ungrammatical; it should be 'With its help, there is a very low chance of forgetting anything.' The definite article 'the' before 'help' is correct here, but the sentence structure needed correction.

× With the help of this I am it is a very low chance to forget anything.

✓ With its help, there is a very low chance of forgetting anything.

The phrase 'I am it is a very low chance' is incorrect and confusing. The correct expression is 'there is a very low chance of forgetting anything.' Also, 'with the help of this' can be more naturally expressed as 'with its help.' The preposition 'of' is correctly used with 'chance'.

× Well, many people have sharp memory so they don't forget things easily.

✓ Well, many people have a sharp memory so they don't forget things easily.

The noun 'memory' is countable in this context and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Without 'a', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Apart from this, they also think that it is the waste is of time, so they do not prefer to make a list for their work or for anything.

✓ Apart from this, they also think that it is a waste of time, so they do not prefer to make a list for their work or for anything.

The phrase 'the waste is of time' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a waste of time' without 'is' and with the indefinite article 'a' because it refers to a general concept.

× Well, I well I prefer to make a list or on my mobile phone because it is very convenient to me in order to bring it anywhere because I always keep my phone in my pocket as well as I always prepare my list in the notes app. For which I know.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient to carry anywhere since I always keep my phone in my pocket. I also prepare my list in the notes app, which I know well.

The original sentence has repetition ('I well I'), incorrect conjunctions ('or on my mobile phone'), and awkward phrasing ('convenient to me in order to bring it anywhere'). The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness by removing repetition, using appropriate prepositions, and restructuring for coherence. The fragment 'For which I know' is incomplete and is corrected to 'which I know well.'