List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of "I save myself in order to some useless shopping," say "I avoid buying unnecessary items." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which saves both time and money.

제안: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to use clear topic sentences and linking words like "because" and "also" properly. Avoid repetition of words like "always." Make your sentences more concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks efficiently. Also, it saves time by keeping me focused and ensuring I don't forget important duties.

제안: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and more natural phrasing. Avoid repeating "so" and incorrect phrases like "do not to forget." Use linking words like "because" and "also" to connect ideas logically.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and don't often forget things. Also, others feel that making lists wastes time, so they prefer not to use them.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and grammatical errors. Try to speak more clearly and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words and avoid repeating phrases. Also, complete your sentences fully.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me. This makes it easy to check my list whenever I go shopping.

× Yes, I prefer to prepare a list when I go for a shopping because it is a convenient way to remember all the things.

✓ Yes, I prefer to prepare a list when I go shopping because it is a convenient way to remember all the things.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'for a'. This is because 'shopping' here functions as a verb in the '-ing' form after 'go'.

× Apart from this, with the help of this, I save myself in order to some useless shopping.

✓ Apart from this, with the help of this, I save myself from some useless shopping.

The phrase 'save myself in order to some useless shopping' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'from' to indicate avoidance of something. 'In order to' is used to express purpose and is not appropriate here.

× Well, I always prefer to make a list for my work it and it always works because it always helped me in order to organize the things in proper way.

✓ Well, I always prefer to make a list for my work and it always works because it always helps me to organize things properly.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it' after 'work' which is unnecessary and causes confusion. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency. 'In order to' can be simplified to 'to'. 'In proper way' should be 'properly' as an adverb.

× Apart from this it also save my time.

✓ Apart from this, it also saves my time.

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× So I can say that making a list on our work is best way to.

✓ So I can say that making a list for our work is the best way.

The phrase 'making a list on our work' is incorrect; 'for our work' is correct. Also, 'best way to' is incomplete and should be 'the best way'. The sentence structure is incomplete and needs correction.

× Well, some people have very sharp memory, so they do not to forget things easily, so that's why they do not make a list.

✓ Well, some people have a very sharp memory, so they do not forget things easily; that's why they do not make a list.

The phrase 'do not to forget' is incorrect; it should be 'do not forget'. Also, 'very sharp memory' needs an article 'a'. The sentence structure is improved by replacing the second 'so' with a semicolon.

× As well as with that is some people think that it is a wasted of time, so they do not make a list for anything.

✓ Also, some people think that it is a waste of time, so they do not make a list for anything.

The phrase 'As well as with that is' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Wasted of time' should be 'waste of time'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× Well I can see well I can see that I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because because every time I keep it with me in my pocket so when ever I go for a shopping so it for the easiest way to him. To take it with me and saw.

✓ Well, I can see that I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because I always keep it with me in my pocket, so whenever I go shopping, it is the easiest way to take it with me and see it.

The original sentence has repetition ('well I can see well I can see'), unnecessary words ('because because'), and incorrect phrases ('go for a shopping', 'so it for the easiest way to him', 'and saw'). These are corrected for clarity, grammar, and coherence. 'Go shopping' is the correct phrase. The sentence is restructured to be grammatically correct and understandable.