List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le 'shopping' ko thau ma 'stopping' bhayeko cha, ra verb form pani thik chhaina. Tapai le sentence lai natural ra spashta banau, jasma tapai ko vichar pratyaksha ra spashta huncha.

예시: Usually, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I just pick up the things I like when I am in the store.

제안: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra grammar ko samasya cha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dina parcha ra sentence lai complete banaunu parcha. Tapai le 'habit' ko barema spashta bhanna saknu huncha.

예시: No, I don't have the habit of making lists for my work because I prefer to remember tasks mentally.

제안: Tapai le prashna ko uttar ma thap spashta ra samarthan dena parcha. Grammar ra vocabulary ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le 'people' ko plural form ra verb agreement ma dhyan dinu parcha.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because things often don't go as planned, so they find lists less useful.

제안: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra coherence ko kami cha. Tapai le sentence haru lai jodne linking words prayog garnu parcha ra grammar sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le apno pasand ko karan spashta bhanna saknu huncha.

예시: I prefer making lists both on paper and on my phone because when I am outside, I can easily check my phone to see the list I have made.

× When I goes in the store, I just picked up the things that I like.

✓ When I go into the store, I just pick up the things that I like.

The verb 'goes' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'. It should be 'go'. Also, 'picked' is past tense, but the sentence is in present habitual tense, so 'pick' is correct. Additionally, 'in the store' is better expressed as 'into the store' to indicate movement.

× I just picked up the things that I like.

✓ I just pick up the things that I like.

The verb 'picked' is in past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'pick' should be used.

× Back. Will I don't have the habit to make a list for my work?

✓ Actually, I don't have the habit of making a list for my work.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Will' and has awkward structure. 'Will' is a modal verb not appropriate here. Also, 'habit to make' should be 'habit of making' to correctly express the idea.

× I don't know about the other peoples but in my life usually things doesn't go that I think.

✓ I don't know about other people, but in my life usually things don't go as I think.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. Also, 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural subject 'things'. The phrase 'go that I think' is awkward and corrected to 'go as I think'.

× I don't make a list for the stopping because.

✓ I don't make a list for shopping because.

The word 'stopping' is incorrect; it should be 'shopping'. Also, 'for the stopping' is incorrect prepositional usage; 'for shopping' is correct.

× When I'm going outside or doing something outside the home, I can watch the things and I can watch the list that I have made an when I am me.

✓ When I'm going outside or doing something outside the home, I can check the things and I can check the list that I have made when I am out.

The phrase 'watch the things' is incorrect; 'check the things' is more appropriate. Also, 'an when I am me' is unclear and corrected to 'when I am out' to make sense in context.

× Boot I prefer both making this thing paperin making list in the phone.

✓ But I prefer both making lists on paper and making lists on the phone.

The sentence has several errors: 'Boot' should be 'But'; 'this thing paperin' is incorrect and replaced with 'lists on paper'; 'making list in the phone' corrected to 'making lists on the phone' for proper preposition and plural form.