List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar errors, such as 'keep my spendings in limit' should be 'keep my spending within limits'.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go because it helps me keep my spending within limits and saves time. For example, sometimes I forget items, but the list reminds me to buy everything I need.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'make list' instead of 'make a list'. Adding a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words will improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me prioritize tasks. For instance, I can focus on urgent tasks first and complete less important ones later, which makes me more efficient.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to organize your ideas clearly with linking words and avoid unnecessary phrases like 'thank you'. Also, correct mistakes such as 'make the lesson' which should be 'make the list'.

예시: In my experience, some people dislike making lists because they feel too lazy to write things down. On the other hand, some believe their memory is good enough to remember tasks without a list.

제안: Your answer has good content but lacks fluency and contains incomplete sentences. Use clear and complete sentences with linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'I'm a kind of person who likes to say stay updated'.

예시: I prefer making my lists on my phone using the Notes app because it helps me stay updated. However, before I had a phone, I used to write my lists on paper.

× Yes, I always prefer to make all this before I go shopping because it always helped me to keep my. Spendings in limit and also it saves a lot of time because sometimes I forget to buy some things then it helps me a lot.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make all this before I go shopping because it has always helped me to keep my spendings within limits and also it saves a lot of time because sometimes I forget to buy some things then it helps me a lot.

The original sentence uses 'helped' which is simple past tense, but the context requires present perfect tense 'has helped' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'Spendings in limit' is incorrect; it should be 'spendings within limits' to correctly express keeping expenses controlled.

× Yes, I always make list before I start working on something because if you have A to do list it helps you to work more efficiently and you know what task to prioritize and which one you can complete later.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I start working on something because if you have a to-do list it helps you to work more efficiently and you know which tasks to prioritize and which ones you can complete later.

The original sentence misses the article 'a' before 'list' and 'to do list'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the plural context, and 'which one' should be 'which ones' to agree with the plural 'tasks'.

× As per my experience, I feel like people don't like making lists because sometimes they're just too lazy to write stuff down and some time on the other hand, they think that they have good memory and they can actually memorize everything that they don't need to make the lesson, they can complete their tasks.

✓ As per my experience, I feel like people don't like making lists because sometimes they're just too lazy to write stuff down, and sometimes, on the other hand, they think that they have a good memory and can actually memorize everything so they don't need to make the list; they can complete their tasks the way they are.

The original sentence has run-on and confusing conjunctions. 'some time on the other hand' should be 'sometimes, on the other hand,' to correctly contrast ideas. Also, 'make the lesson' is incorrect; it should be 'make the list'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct conjunction use.

× I'm a kind of person who likes to say stay updated, so I always prefer making my list in my mobile application named notes.

✓ I'm the kind of person who likes to stay updated, so I always prefer making my list on my mobile application named Notes.

The phrase 'likes to say stay updated' is incorrect; it should be 'likes to stay updated'. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to apps; 'on' is the correct preposition to use with applications. 'Notes' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun (app name).

× Before using. Before I got my phone, I used to make a list on a paper.

✓ Before I got my phone, I used to make a list on paper.

The fragment 'Before using.' is incomplete and unnecessary. Also, 'on a paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on paper' without the article 'a'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper usage.