List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语法和句子结构不够连贯，且有重复和断断续续的表达。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句和重复，同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I often forget to buy essential items. Making a list helps me remember everything I need and shop more efficiently.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不连贯，缺少清晰的主题句和支持细节。建议练习完整回答，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: It depends on the task and deadline. If I have many things to do and limited time, I make a list to prioritize my work. Otherwise, I may not use a list.

제안: 回答表达不完整，句子断断续续，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议练习完整表达原因，并用连接词连接句子，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Some people may find making lists unnecessary and time-consuming because they feel it interrupts their workflow or they prefer to remember tasks mentally.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，句子不连贯。建议练习使用完整句子表达偏好，并说明理由，使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists are easy to lose. With my phone, I can check my list anytime and set reminders to stay organized.

× Yes, of course, because I found myself. Always forgot to buy something that is really necessary when I. Was shopping so making the list really helps me to buy the things. Without forgot.

✓ Yes, of course, because I found myself always forgetting to buy something that is really necessary when I was shopping, so making the list really helps me to buy the things without forgetting.

这里的错误是动词时态使用不当。'found myself always forgot' 应该用现在分词形式 'found myself always forgetting' 来表示持续发生的动作；'Without forgot' 应该用动名词形式 'without forgetting'。建议使用动名词形式来表达持续或未完成的动作。

× I think it depends on the. Task and the timeline if I got many. Things to do and the time is limited so I will make a list so that I can. Do the things in order, but if not. And I just.

✓ I think it depends on the task and the timeline. If I have many things to do and the time is limited, I will make a list so that I can do the things in order, but if not, I just don't.

原句断句不合理，导致句子结构混乱。需要将句子合理分割并补充缺失的部分，使句子完整通顺。

× From my perspective, maybe they think making list is something that. Unnecessary and. Making list already. Kill time sometimes because you need to remind what you should do and.

✓ From my perspective, maybe they think making a list is something unnecessary and making a list already kills time sometimes because you need to remind yourself what you should do.

'making list' 缺少冠词，应为 'making a list'；'making list already kill time' 主谓不一致，动词应为第三人称单数 'kills'；'you need to remind what you should do' 缺少反身代词，应为 'remind yourself'。

× Actually, well, I prefer to make a list of my phone because, you know, paper. Is really. Tiny item, so you may. Miss then in somewhere but your phone you can. Check their own time and you can remind you.

✓ Actually, well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because, you know, paper is really a tiny item, so you may lose it somewhere, but with your phone you can check it anytime and it can remind you.

'make a list of my phone' 应为 'make a list on my phone'，表示在手机上制作清单；'miss then in somewhere' 表达不当，应为 'lose it somewhere'；'check their own time' 不合适，改为 'check it anytime' 更准确；'you can remind you' 应为 'it can remind you'，主语和宾语错误。