List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and complete by combining your ideas into one coherent sentence and avoiding redundancy. For example, say: "I always make a list when I shop to ensure I don't forget the important items I need."

예시: I always make a list when I shop to ensure I don't forget the important items I need.

제안: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example: "Sometimes I make a list of tasks I need to do at work, but not always. When I do, it helps me stay organized."

예시: Sometimes I make a list of tasks I need to do at work, but not always. When I do, it helps me stay organized.

제안: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically. For example: "I think some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary. Also, as people get older, their memory may decline, so lists can be helpful."

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary. Also, as people get older, their memory may decline, so lists can be helpful.

제안: Make your answer more fluent and natural by combining sentences and avoiding repetition. For example: "I prefer to make lists on paper because it's convenient. Although using my phone is also easy, I like writing things down physically."

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's convenient. Although using my phone is also easy, I like writing things down physically.

× I always make a list when I shop so that I could not forget.

✓ I always make a list when I shop so that I will not forget.

The sentence uses 'could not' which is past tense, but the context is about a habitual action in the present. Using 'will not' correctly expresses future intention or purpose in this context.

× The important things that I needed to buy.

✓ So I don't forget the important things that I need to buy.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and subject. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence.

× There are times that they need to. Write down all the things that I need to do in the work or at work.

✓ There are times when I need to write down all the things that I need to do at work.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to themselves. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs to be combined properly.

× Write down all the things that I need to do in the work or at work.

✓ Write down all the things that I need to do at work.

The phrase 'in the work' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to a workplace.

× And there are times also, but it's not often time that I'm doing it.

✓ And there are times, but not often, when I do it.

The original sentence is awkward and fragmented. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× There are times also that I didn't put it in.

✓ There are also times when I don't put it in.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the context is habitual, present tense 'don't' is appropriate.

× I think it's because. And they're making list in order not to forget the important things that they're going to do.

✓ I think it's because they make lists in order not to forget the important things that they are going to do.

The first sentence is incomplete. Also, 'making list' should be 'make lists' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× And they're making list in order not to forget the important things that they're going to do.

✓ And they make lists in order not to forget the important things that they are going to do.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the plural subject 'they'.

× And as you age I think your memory also. Did Terri it a little bit?

✓ And as you age, I think your memory deteriorates a little bit.

The phrase 'Did Terri it' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correct verb is 'deteriorates' in present tense to match the context.

× I prefer to take on paper.

✓ I prefer to take notes on paper.

The phrase 'take on paper' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'notes' and using the preposition 'on' clarifies the meaning.

× And. It's convenient.

✓ And it's convenient.

The period after 'And' creates a sentence fragment. It should be combined into one sentence.

× Although it's convenient to write on the phone, but I I wanted to put it into paper and write all the things that I needed to do or I needed to buy.

✓ Although it's convenient to write on the phone, I want to put it on paper and write all the things that I need to do or buy.

Using both 'Although' and 'but' together is redundant. Also, tense consistency is needed: 'want' instead of 'wanted' and 'need' instead of 'needed' to match present preference.