List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and using correct sentence structures. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a supporting detail using linking words.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the important items I need to buy. Moreover, it ensures that I don't forget anything during my shopping trip.

제안: Your answer has good content but is affected by repetition and unclear phrasing. Focus on structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details connected with linking words. Also, correct grammar and avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I always make a list of my work tasks because it helps me stay organized and manage my time efficiently. This way, I can complete all important tasks within the deadline and avoid last-minute stress.

제안: Your answer attempts to explain the reason but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and creativity. They believe that setting strict boundaries limits what they can achieve, so they prefer to stay flexible without a fixed plan.

제안: Your answer has good points but is affected by unclear sentences and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details linked logically. Also, use correct grammar and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and accessible anytime. Additionally, I can easily add or remove items, unlike paper lists which can be lost or damaged.

× Yes, I do make the list when I go for shopping as it is it if it makes me easy to remember all the important thing which I need to buy while I go for shopping and it allows me to never skip any item which I want to buy.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping as it makes it easy for me to remember all the important things which I need to buy while I go shopping and it allows me to never skip any item which I want to buy.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'the list' and 'all the important thing'. 'The list' should be 'a list' because it is not a specific list previously mentioned. 'Important thing' should be plural 'important things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'go for shopping' is better as 'go shopping'. These corrections improve singular/plural agreement and article usage.

× Yes, I do make the list when I go for shopping as it is it if it makes me easy to remember all the important thing which I need to buy while I go for shopping and it allows me to never skip any item which I want to buy.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping as it makes it easy for me to remember all the important things which I need to buy while I go shopping and it allows me to never skip any item which I want to buy.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'makes me easy' should be 'makes it easy for me' to correctly use prepositions and idiomatic expressions.

× Yes, I always, yes, I always prefer to make a list of my world.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list of my work.

The word 'world' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'work'. This is a vocabulary error but also affects meaning. No plural issue here, but correction is necessary for clarity.

× As it makes as it makes me more organized and save my time to achieve all the task in a given time frame and avoid last minute puzzle.

✓ It makes me more organized and saves my time to complete all the tasks within a given time frame and avoid last-minute pressure.

The sentence has repetition ('as it makes as it makes'), missing subject-verb agreement ('save' should be 'saves'), and awkward phrasing ('last minute puzzle' should be 'last-minute pressure'). Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× To complete all the important tasks.

✓ I complete all the important tasks.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'I' and changing to a complete sentence corrects the structure.

× So I do prefer to make a list of all the tasks which I need to complete.

✓ So, I prefer to make a list of all the tasks that I need to complete.

Adding a comma after 'So' improves readability. 'Do prefer' is acceptable but 'prefer' is more natural here. 'Which' can be replaced with 'that' for restrictive clauses.

× For some people dislike making list of the things they want to make even a certain time frame as they are of that mindset that they think that maybe we can get measurements and they got a restricted between the boundaries of the things which they want to achieve.

✓ Some people dislike making lists of the things they want to do within a certain time frame because they have the mindset that it may impose restrictions and limit the boundaries of what they want to achieve.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. Correcting sentence structure, verb forms, and prepositions clarifies the meaning and improves grammar.

× For some people dislike making list of the things they want to make even a certain time frame as they are of that mindset that they think that maybe we can get measurements and they got a restricted between the boundaries of the things which they want to achieve.

✓ Some people dislike making lists of the things they want to do within a certain time frame because they have the mindset that it may impose restrictions and limit the boundaries of what they want to achieve.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to agree in number. Also, 'things they want to make' is better as 'things they want to do' for clarity.

× So there are many people who don't want to make a list and bound themselves within the certain words.

✓ So there are many people who don't want to make a list and bind themselves within certain boundaries.

'Bound themselves within the certain words' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'bind themselves within certain boundaries'. This corrects preposition and word choice errors.

× I put the complete list on mobile phone because it is very convenient and easy to assess any time and I can quickly add or delete item which I think are not important for me if I talk about paper.

✓ I put the complete list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and easy to access anytime, and I can quickly add or delete items which I think are not important for me. If I talk about paper,

'On mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone'. 'Easy to assess' should be 'easy to access'. 'Any time' is better as 'anytime'. 'Delete item' should be 'delete items' for plural agreement.

× I put the complete list on mobile phone because it is very convenient and easy to assess any time and I can quickly add or delete item which I think are not important for me if I talk about paper.

✓ I put the complete list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and easy to access anytime, and I can quickly add or delete items which I think are not important for me. If I talk about paper,

'Item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things that can be added or deleted.

× It limits me. Do I dictate and sometimes may lose and I have seen that the frame it. From scratch whenever I needed.

✓ It limits me. I have to dictate, and sometimes I may lose it. I have seen that I have to start from scratch whenever I need to.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Correcting sentence structure and verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I prefer to make things on mobile phone as compared to.

✓ So I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone as compared to paper.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object of comparison. Adding 'paper' completes the comparison. Also, 'make things on mobile phone' is better as 'make lists on my mobile phone' for clarity and correct preposition use.