List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构不完整，影响了表达的自然和有效性。建议练习使用完整句子，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

제안: 回答中存在较多语法错误和表达不清，句子不连贯，影响理解。建议练习用简单明了的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list before work to ensure I don't forget any important tasks.

제안: 回答内容不够具体，表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议用更具体的理由解释，并注意句子完整和连贯。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不完整，语法错误较多。建议练习使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access them anywhere, unlike paper lists which I might lose.

× Yes, of course I make a list where I shop because this way can help me to remember what I need to buy an.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list when I shop because this way it can help me remember what I need to buy.

这里应使用介词短语 'when I shop' 来表示购物时，而不是 'where I shop'。此外，'can help me to remember' 中的 'to' 可以省略，'help' 后面直接接动词原形。最后，'an' 是多余的，应删除。建议改为 'when I shop'，并简化句子结构。

× Yes, of course I will make a list for my walk before.

✓ Yes, of course I always make a list before my work.

这里表达的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时而不是将来时 'will make'。另外，'walk' 应为 'work'，且 'before' 应放在句尾修饰 'make a list'。建议使用一般现在时表达习惯。

× When I stopped a walk before I will make a list was sure I need to do an.

✓ Before I start work, I make a list to be sure of what I need to do.

句子时态混乱，'stopped' 是过去式，但后面用 'will make' 表示将来时，且句子结构不完整。应使用一般现在时表达习惯动作。'a walk' 应为 'work'。建议调整句子结构，使用正确时态和词汇。

× Dan. I don't will forgetting some important things.

✓ Then, I won't forget some important things.

'don't will' 是错误的助动词搭配，应使用 'won't' 表示将来否定。'forgetting' 应用动词原形 'forget'。建议使用正确的助动词和动词形式。

× Because I think maybe some people will think making a list is trouble and need to buy many things.

✓ Because I think maybe some people think making a list is troublesome and that they need to buy many things.

'will think' 在这里不合适，表达一般观点应使用一般现在时。'trouble' 应改为形容词 'troublesome'。'and need to buy' 缺少主语，需补充。建议使用一般现在时和完整句子结构。

× It's really. Spend times.

✓ It really wastes time.

'Spend times' 词性错误，应使用动词短语 'wastes time'。'really' 应修饰动词。建议使用正确的动词表达浪费时间。

× I prefer to make on this on my phone because I think if I make a list on the paper I will miss and it sometimes.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I think if I make a list on paper, I will sometimes lose it.

'make on this on my phone' 结构混乱，应为 'make the list on my phone'。'on the paper' 应为 'on paper'。'miss and it sometimes' 语序错误，应为 'sometimes lose it'。建议调整介词和词序。

× But when I use the phone to make a list, it will not. I can see the list anywhere.

✓ But when I use the phone to make a list, it will not get lost. I can see the list anywhere.

'it will not.' 句子不完整，缺少谓语。应补充 'get lost' 表达完整意思。建议补全句子使其完整通顺。