List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use correct verb forms and avoid unnecessary words. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget items. This helps me avoid multiple trips to the store and saves time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on forming complete sentences and clearly explaining how making lists helps you with work. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work tasks. They help me stay organized and ensure I complete all my responsibilities on time.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to clearly explain reasons why some people avoid making lists, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Provide specific reasons and examples.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally. Others may feel lists limit their flexibility.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain your preference with supporting details using linking words. Use simple and correct sentences.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily review and update them anytime.

× Yes, so as I usually makes a list of those things which are I am going to buy it from the shops because sometimes I forget things and then feeling first rated for coming back to the shop.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of the things I am going to buy from the shops because sometimes I forget things and then feel frustrated for coming back to the shop.

The verb 'makes' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'make' in the present tense (third person singular rule does not apply to 'I'). Also, 'feeling first rated' is incorrect; it should be 'feel frustrated' to express the emotion properly.

× Yes, so as I usually makes a list of those things which are I am going to buy it from the shops because sometimes I forget things and then feeling first rated for coming back to the shop.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of the things I am going to buy from the shops because sometimes I forget things and then feel frustrated for coming back to the shop.

The phrase 'which are I am going to buy it' is incorrect. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and 'which are' is awkward here. The correct phrasing is 'the things I am going to buy' to clearly refer to the items.

× Surely I make list for my own works or any tossed it or assigned to me.

✓ Surely I make a list for my own work or any tasks assigned to me.

The word 'works' is incorrect in this context; 'work' is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'tossed it' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'tasks'. The sentence needs 'a list' (singular) and 'tasks' (plural) to be correct.

× Surely I make list for my own works or any tossed it or assigned to me.

✓ Surely I make a list for my own work or any tasks assigned to me.

The phrase 'any tossed it' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'any tasks' to refer to assignments. Also, 'assigned to me' correctly modifies 'tasks'.

× Because it makes me very convenient and alert about the.

✓ Because it makes me very comfortable and alert about them.

The adjective 'convenient' is incorrectly used to describe a person; 'comfortable' is appropriate. Also, 'about the' is incomplete and should be 'about them' referring to tasks or responsibilities.

× And doing are fulfilling all the responsibilities related to work and if our funded also provide me a reminder about the also works that are.

✓ It helps me fulfill all the responsibilities related to work, and it also provides me reminders about the tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Doing are fulfilling' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me fulfill'. 'If our funded' is unclear and likely a mishearing. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, mostly people are very concerned about forgetting the thing they are required and Boeing so just be cause of forgetting they are making a list of items.

✓ Yes, mostly people are very concerned about forgetting the things they need, so because of that, they make a list of items.

The phrase 'the thing they are required and Boeing' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'the things they need'. Also, 'just be cause of forgetting' is corrected to 'because of that' for clarity.

× Currently on preparing a poem in the I have a diary.

✓ Currently, I am preparing a poem in my diary.

The phrase 'on preparing a poem in the I have a diary' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in my diary' and the sentence needs proper subject-verb order.

× Currently on preparing a poem in the I have a diary.

✓ Currently, I am preparing a poem in my diary.

The pronoun 'I have a diary' is misplaced and should be 'my diary' to indicate possession.

× In my phone, so I usually make based on an ad.

✓ On my phone, I usually make lists based on an app.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect for devices; 'on my phone' is correct. Also, 'make based on an ad' is unclear; likely 'make lists based on an app' is intended.

× Because every single time. So you can revise themes in see them.

✓ Because every single time, I can revise them and see them.

The original sentences are fragments and unclear. They are combined and corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So you can revise themes in see them.

✓ So I can revise them and see them.

The pronoun 'you' is inconsistent with the speaker's perspective; it should be 'I'. Also, 'themes' is likely a mishearing of 'them'.

× So I prefer this into make a list on my phone.

✓ So I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'prefer this into make' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'prefer to make'.