List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences, which affect clarity. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'so'.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy. This helps me stay organised and saves time when I am looking for items, so I can shop more efficiently.

제안: Your answer is unclear due to incomplete sentences and incorrect word usage. Make sure to complete your sentences and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, explain briefly how making lists helps you at work.

예시: I always use a list for my work because I have many tasks. It helps me stay organised and track which tasks I have completed, so I can manage my time better.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand because of incomplete sentences and unclear ideas. Try to express your opinion clearly and provide reasons with complete sentences.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything. Also, they may feel that making lists wastes time or is not necessary for them.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use complete sentences and clearer vocabulary. Also, explain why using the phone is convenient.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I am not always at my computer. Since I always carry my phone, it is easy to check and update my lists whenever I need to.

× Yes, I usually create a shopping list when I go grocery shopping because I often forgotten what I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually create a shopping list when I go grocery shopping because I often forget what I need to buy.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle form and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to be correct. Here, the simple present tense 'forget' is appropriate because the sentence describes a habitual action.

× It helps me stay organized and save time by.

✓ It helps me stay organized and save time.

The phrase 'by' is incomplete and creates a sentence fragment. Removing 'by' corrects the sentence structure and makes it complete.

× The shop looking for the items.

✓ I shop looking for the items.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. Adding 'I' as the subject and adjusting the verb form clarifies the sentence. However, a better correction is 'I shop while looking for the items' or 'I look for the items while shopping.'

× The shop looking for the items.

✓ I look for the items in the shop.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper subject-verb agreement. Adding 'I' as the subject and using the correct verb form 'look' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I always used to nice for the work because I have a lot of tasks in my work so it will be more organized an I can take out which task I have completed.

✓ I always used to make a list for work because I have a lot of tasks, so it is more organized and I can check which tasks I have completed.

The phrase 'used to nice' is incorrect; 'make a list' fits the context. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. The verb 'take out' is incorrect here; 'check' or 'mark' is appropriate. The sentence also needs better structure for clarity.

× So I prefer to use the.

✓ So I prefer to use it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'use the'. Replacing 'the' with 'it' completes the sentence logically.

× I think they think they know need to create a.

✓ I think they believe they do not need to create a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'believe' and 'do not' clarifies the meaning, and 'list' completes the thought.

× To do nice because they find it.

✓ They find making a to-do list

The sentence fragment 'To do nice because they find it.' is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be restructured to convey the intended meaning.

× To do this is wasted time an.

✓ to do this is a waste of time and

The phrase 'To do this is wasted time an.' is grammatically incorrect and incomplete. Correcting it to 'to do this is a waste of time and' improves clarity and grammar.

× Not very secure for them.

✓ it is not very useful for them.

The fragment 'Not very secure for them.' lacks a subject and verb. Replacing it with a complete sentence improves clarity.

× I prefer to use the nice on the phone because I'm not always work in front of the computer, so the phone is always come with me so it's easy to check the chat list and modify the needs for work.

✓ I prefer to use the list on the phone because I don't always work in front of the computer, so the phone always comes with me. It's easy to check the shopping list and modify the tasks for work.

The phrase 'use the nice' is incorrect; 'list' fits the context. 'I'm not always work' should be 'I don't always work'. 'Phone is always come with me' should be 'phone always comes with me'. 'Chat list' likely means 'shopping list' or 'task list'. 'Modify the needs for work' is unclear; 'modify the tasks for work' is better.