List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，避免重复和语法错误，表达购物时制作清单的原因时要简洁明了。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need to buy. It helps me stay organized and avoid missing important items.

제안: 回答结构混乱，语法和表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明制作工作清单的好处，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and keep a clear mind when dealing with clients. Additionally, I create a timetable to check if my tasks are completed on time.

제안: 回答内容不连贯，表达不清楚。建议用完整句子解释人们不喜欢制作清单的原因，注意逻辑连贯和词汇准确。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because it requires planning in advance, which they find boring. Also, they feel that making lists takes too much time and limits their flexibility.

제안: 回答表达不够自然，语法错误影响理解。建议用完整句子清楚表达偏好，并说明原因，注意词汇和句子结构。

예시: When I make a list, I prefer using my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can check the list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, because I'm always careless and make a list could remind me what things.

✓ Yes, because I'm always careless and making a list could remind me of what things.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示动作的进行或习惯，原句中'make'应改为'making'。

× make a list could remind me what things.

✓ making a list could remind me of what things.

动词'remind'后应接介词'of'表示提醒的内容，原句缺少'of'。

× Uh. We want by or. We. Should buy.

✓ Uh, what we want to buy or what we should buy.

原句中'we want by or'语法错误，应使用'what we want to buy'表达想买的东西。

× Yes, I always make a list for my work because it beneficial to my work with a client clear mind and was more I always make a timetable or schedule.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it is beneficial to my work, helps me have a clear mind, and I also always make a timetable or schedule.

缺少动词'is'，句子结构不完整，且表达不清晰，需补充动词并调整句子顺序。

× To check my. Work. Whether it finish?

✓ To check my work whether it is finished.

句子结构不完整，缺少动词'is'，且'finish'应为过去分词'finished'。

× Because making leads means we need prior.

✓ Because making lists means we need to prepare beforehand.

'making leads'应为'making lists'，且'prior'用法不当，应改为'prepare beforehand'。

× Someone. Always feel bored with it.

✓ Some people always feel bored with it.

'Someone'指某个人，语境应为泛指，故用'some people'。

× And field either, making these takes too much time on the limits there.

✓ And feel either, making these takes too much time and limits flexibility.

'field'应为'feel'，'on the limits there'表达不当，应改为'and limits flexibility'。

× Will I make a list?

✓ When I make a list?

'Will I make a list?'语法错误，疑问句应为'When I make a list?'或'I will make a list.'。

× I prefer paper to form because I always carry on phone all the time and I could check the list everywhere.

✓ I prefer paper to phone because I always carry my phone all the time and I can check the list everywhere.

'paper to form'应为'paper to phone'，且'carry on phone'应为'carry my phone'，'could'改为'can'更合适。