List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and filler words. Also, organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. For example, instead of repeating 'market' and saying 'many things I want to process', be more specific and concise.

예시: Yes, I often make a list before going shopping at supermarkets or department stores because I tend to forget items. This helps me ensure I buy everything I need efficiently.

제안: Improve clarity by avoiding incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain why making lists helps you at work. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express your ideas.

예시: Yes, I usually make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks and complete them on time. This method is very effective and helps me stay productive.

제안: Focus on making your sentences complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'exactly I don't believe this kind of practice' and express your opinion clearly.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything they need to do or buy. However, I think this is unrealistic since it's difficult to remember all tasks without a list.

제안: Try to speak in complete sentences and avoid repetition. Clearly state your preference and explain why. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details.

예시: Actually, I use both paper and my phone to make lists. Usually, I write notes on paper and tick tasks off when completed, but sometimes I use my phone for convenience.

× I'd often make a list before uh, going shopping at the supermarket market or at a department store because I easily forget.

✓ I'd often make a list before uh, shopping at the supermarket or at a department store because I easily forget.

The phrase 'going shopping' is correct but can be simplified to 'shopping' after 'before' to sound more natural and concise. The repetition of 'market' is a mistake and should be removed.

× Many things I want to process to make sure that I can get other things I want.

✓ I want to process many things to make sure that I can get the other things I want.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear meaning. Rearranging the sentence clarifies the intention and corrects the structure.

× Absolutely yes, in addition to making a list before and shopping.

✓ Absolutely yes, in addition to making a list before shopping.

The phrase 'before and shopping' is incorrect. It should be 'before shopping' to correctly express the idea.

× because. It is a direct. Or it can or I can complete all the potential task on time and it helps me a lot.

✓ because it helps me complete all the potential tasks on time and it helps me a lot.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× all the potential task on time

✓ all the potential tasks on time

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'all the potential' which implies multiple tasks.

× Everyone can't remember.

✓ No one can remember.

'Everyone can't remember' is confusing and incorrect. 'No one can remember' clearly expresses the intended meaning.

× A primary reason for this. Presently is that they think they can remember all the things they have to do or think they have to purchase in the future.

✓ A primary reason for this presently is that they think they can remember all the things they have to do or have to purchase in the future.

The original sentence is fragmented and has unnecessary punctuation. Combining the sentence and removing the period improves flow and correctness.

× Actually. I do you do utilize two kinds of resources.

✓ Actually, I utilize two kinds of resources.

The phrase 'I do you do utilize' is incorrect and confusing. Simplifying to 'I utilize' corrects the pronoun misuse and improves clarity.

× I usually make a list by writing down on a note an I often ticket when my task is completed for sometimes.

✓ I usually make a list by writing it down on a note and I often tick it when my task is completed. Sometimes, I use...

The phrase 'writing down on a note an' is incorrect; it should be 'writing it down on a note'. 'Ticket' should be 'tick'. The sentence is also incomplete and needs proper punctuation and structure.