List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentences more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and ensure the example is clearly connected to the main idea. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I usually make a checklist when I go shopping because it saves time and helps me remember important items. For instance, I just made a list now of everything I need to buy for the week.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about how the checklist helps you.

예시: Yes, I definitely make a checklist for my work because I have a busy schedule and sometimes forget tasks. However, using a checklist helps me stay organized and complete my work on time.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid repetition and provide a more balanced explanation.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted or prefer flexibility. They might not be very punctual and want to work at their own pace without following a strict schedule.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and make your answer more coherent.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, unlike paper which is inconvenient to carry. It is more flexible to check my schedule anytime on my phone.

× Yes, I usually make a checklist when I go to shopping because it saves a lot of time.

✓ Yes, I usually make a checklist when I go shopping because it saves a lot of time.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the verb in '-ing' form without 'to'. The correct form is 'go shopping'.

× For example, I just right now.

✓ For example, I just did it right now.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'did it' completes the sentence and clarifies the action performed recently.

× All the things that I want to buy an make a checklist.

✓ All the things that I want to buy and make a checklist.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to correctly connect the two actions 'buy' and 'make'.

× sometimes I just don't remember a a lot of work that have to done at the time.

✓ sometimes I just don't remember a lot of work that has to be done at the time.

The phrase 'a a lot' is a typo and should be 'a lot'. Also, 'work' is singular and requires 'has' instead of 'have'. Additionally, 'to done' should be 'to be done' to form the correct passive infinitive.

× But making checklist has helped me a lot. To do my work on time.

✓ But making a checklist has helped me a lot to do my work on time.

The sentence is fragmented. Combining the two parts into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'making checklist' should be 'making a checklist'.

× They just want to do whatever they want at their own and don't want to follow any kind of schedule.

✓ They just want to do whatever they want on their own and don't want to follow any kind of schedule.

The correct prepositional phrase is 'on their own' meaning independently, not 'at their own'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× I preferred to make it on my phone because my phone is every time with me and I can't carry up.

✓ I prefer to make it on my phone because my phone is always with me and I can't carry a piece of paper every time.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context is present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. Also, 'is every time with me' is incorrect; 'is always with me' is the correct phrase. 'Can't carry up' is incomplete and should be 'can't carry a piece of paper every time'.

× And it is more. A flexible to take out my phone and watch what schedule I have made.

✓ And it is more flexible to take out my phone and check the schedule I have made.

The phrase 'more. A flexible' is incorrect; it should be 'more flexible'. Also, 'watch what schedule' is unnatural; 'check the schedule' is the correct collocation.