List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, yesterday I made a list and it saved me from forgetting important things.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Please try to give a direct answer first, then explain with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember tasks. For example, when I am studying at school, I write down my assignments to stay organized.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not address the question properly. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer logical.

예시: Some people do not like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Also, they prefer to remember things naturally rather than writing them down.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many mistakes. Please give a direct answer first, then explain your preference with clear reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid unnecessary words.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. For example, I can easily add or delete items and carry my phone everywhere.

× Just of course I I make it yesterday and I show up because I sometimes I do mistakes of any any I tend to buy.

✓ Just of course I made it yesterday and I showed up because sometimes I make mistakes in what I tend to buy.

The sentence uses present tense verbs 'make' and 'show' when referring to past actions indicated by 'yesterday'. The verbs should be in past tense 'made' and 'showed' to match the time frame. Also, 'do mistakes' is incorrect; 'make mistakes' is the correct collocation.

× Just of course I I make it yesterday and I show up because I sometimes I do mistakes of any any I tend to buy.

✓ Just of course I made it yesterday and I showed up because sometimes I make mistakes in what I tend to buy.

The phrase 'do mistakes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make mistakes'. Also, 'any any' is redundant and unclear, so it is omitted for clarity.

× Yes, of course I make a sister.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list.

The word 'sister' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'list'. Correcting it to 'list' makes the sentence meaningful.

× I usually work 'cause there are many benefits over me like help of memory and secondly secondly it work like a school work and I am going to school so I really I delete in and the system.

✓ I usually work because there are many benefits for me like helping my memory, and secondly, it works like school work. I am going to school so I really rely on the system.

The phrase 'benefits over me' is incorrect; it should be 'benefits for me'. 'Help of memory' should be 'helping my memory'. 'It work' should be 'it works' to agree with singular subject. 'I delete in and the system' is unclear; likely intended 'I rely on the system'.

× When there are many reasons why some people like America, 'cause sometimes people do not buy and how to next step, so some people prefer a Macallister.

✓ There are many reasons why some people do not like making lists, because sometimes people do not buy and do not know the next step, so some people prefer not to make a list.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and words. 'Like America' is likely 'like making lists'. 'Prefer a Macallister' is unclear; corrected to 'prefer not to make a list' for clarity.

× When I press F, well, I prefer a further make a list on the phone number 'cause there are many benefits with vocals.

✓ When I press F, well, I prefer to make a list on the phone because there are many benefits with vocals.

'Prefer a further make' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make'. 'On the phone number' is incorrect; it should be 'on the phone'. 'Benefits with vocals' is unclear; possibly 'benefits with vocals' means 'voice features' but kept as is due to lack of clarity.

× Firstly, I use him more mobile phone and elite member how to sister in an extra step our work, so I prefer.

✓ Firstly, I use my mobile phone more and easily remember how to make a list as an extra step in my work, so I prefer it.

'I use him more mobile phone' is incorrect; 'him' should be 'my'. 'Elite member how to sister' is unclear; likely 'easily remember how to make a list'. 'Our work' changed to 'my work' for consistency. Added 'it' at the end for completeness.