List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не совсем ясен. Рекомендуется использовать полные предложения и избегать разговорных сокращений, чтобы звучать более естественно и понятно.

예시: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I see something interesting.

제안: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить связность и добавить больше деталей, используя связующие слова для логичности.

예시: Yes, I make lists on my phone because they are very useful. For example, I usually create tables to track my weekly results, which helps me stay organized and motivated.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясности. Следует использовать полные предложения, избегать ошибок и более чётко выражать мысли.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it boring. Instead, they prefer to shop freely and buy whatever they want without planning.

제안: Ответ можно сделать более связным и грамматически правильным, используя связующие слова и полные предложения.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I usually create tables that I can update every week, which makes it very useful for me.

× I don't have a list when I go shopping be 'cause I like buy things which I saw an I'll act like it.

✓ I don't have a list when I go shopping because I like buying things which I saw and I'll act like it.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'buying' to indicate the action of liking an activity. Using the base form 'buy' after 'like' is incorrect in this context.

× I don't have a list when I go shopping be 'cause I like buy things which I saw an I'll act like it.

✓ I don't have a list when I go shopping because I like buying things which I saw and I'll act like it.

The conjunction 'be 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with the correct conjunction 'because' for proper grammar and clarity.

× I don't have a list when I go shopping be 'cause I like buy things which I saw an I'll act like it.

✓ I don't have a list when I go shopping because I like buying things which I saw and I'll act like them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect here because it refers to a singular object, but 'things' is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural noun.

× Yes, I make a list for my phone because it's useful and I like it.

✓ Yes, I make a list on my phone because it's useful and I like it.

The correct preposition to indicate the device used is 'on' rather than 'for'. We say 'make a list on my phone' to show the list is created using the phone.

× I usually make tables so I can see my results every week.

✓ I usually make tables so I can see my results every week.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× In my opinion, people don't like making please because they find is not exciting and so they.

✓ In my opinion, people don't like making lists because they find it not exciting and so they.

The word 'please' is incorrect and should be 'lists' to match the context. Also, 'is' should be 'it' to correctly refer to 'making lists'.

× In my opinion, people don't like making please because they find is not exciting and so they.

✓ In my opinion, people don't like making lists because they find it not exciting, so they prefer full shopping and just buy things which they want.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'prefer full shopping and just buy things which they want' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.

× Like full shopping and the just buy things which they want.

✓ They like full shopping and then just buy things which they want.

The sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect article usage. Adding 'They' as the subject and correcting 'the' to 'then' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make, at least in my phone.

✓ I prefer to make it, at least on my phone.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a device; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, adding 'it' clarifies what is being made.

× I usually make table because it's useful and I can.

✓ I usually make tables because they're useful and I can.

The singular 'table' should be plural 'tables' to match the context of making multiple lists or tables. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with the plural subject.

× Make it new every week. So it's kind of really, really useful.

✓ I make it new every week, so it's really useful.

The original sentences are fragmented. Combining them into one sentence improves flow and clarity. Also, 'kind of really, really' is redundant; simplifying to 'really' is better.