List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强句子结构的准确性和逻辑性，避免重复和语气词的使用，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy. This way, I can shop more efficiently and avoid forgetting anything.

제안: 回答不完整且语法混乱，建议使用完整句子表达观点，明确说明制作清单的频率和效果，并避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I sometimes make lists to organize my study tasks. It helps me complete my duties on time and improves my efficiency.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免模糊和重复，清楚表达原因。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it doesn't help them manage their time. Others might find it unnecessary if they can complete tasks without a schedule.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，建议使用完整句子，避免重复表达，提高语言的准确性和流畅性。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and helps me complete my work more quickly and efficiently.

× Yes, I often make list that can let me, uh, remember the things that I want to buy an make a list makes my mind more cleared that I wouldn't be a very.

✓ Yes, I often make lists that can help me remember the things that I want to buy, and making a list makes my mind clearer so that I wouldn't be very forgetful.

这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”，因为表示经常制作多个清单。

× Yes, I often make list that can let me, uh, remember the things that I want to buy an make a list makes my mind more cleared that I wouldn't be a very.

✓ Yes, I often make lists that can help me remember the things that I want to buy, and making a list makes my mind clearer so that I wouldn't be very forgetful.

原句中“an”应为连词“and”，连接两个并列句。

× Yes, I often make list that can let me, uh, remember the things that I want to buy an make a list makes my mind more cleared that I wouldn't be a very.

✓ Yes, I often make lists that can help me remember the things that I want to buy, and making a list makes my mind clearer so that I wouldn't be very forgetful.

“more cleared”应改为“clearer”，因为“clear”是形容词，比较级形式为“clearer”。

× I will make some schedule in in my study that I need to complete my duty in time and it makes me more efficient and quickly to complete the works that I need to and it also.

✓ I will make some schedules in my study because I need to complete my duties on time, and it makes me more efficient and quicker to complete the work that I need to do.

“schedule”和“duty”应使用复数形式“schedules”和“duties”，表示多个计划和任务。

× I will make some schedule in in my study that I need to complete my duty in time and it makes me more efficient and quickly to complete the works that I need to and it also.

✓ I will make some schedules in my study because I need to complete my duties on time, and it makes me more efficient and quicker to complete the work that I need to do.

“quickly”应改为“quicker”，因为这里是比较级，修饰形容词“efficient”。

× Maybe the people don't make legs list think that it wouldn't help them to do the work on the time.

✓ Maybe the people who don't make lists think that it wouldn't help them to do the work on time.

“legs list”应为“lists”，且“people”后应加“who”引导定语从句。

× Maybe the people don't make legs list think that it wouldn't help them to do the work on the time.

✓ Maybe the people who don't make lists think that it wouldn't help them to do the work on time.

“on the time”应改为“on time”，表示准时。

× Maybe the people don't make legs list think that it wouldn't help them to do the work on the time.

✓ Maybe the people who don't make lists think that it wouldn't help them to do the work on time.

缺少关系代词“who”，使句子结构完整。

× Maybe they are very lazy or they can complete the work on time without the schedule with the list.

✓ Maybe they are very lazy or they can complete the work on time without a schedule or a list.

“the schedule with the list”表达不清，应改为“a schedule or a list”，更符合习惯用法。

× I prefer make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”，而不是直接动词原形。

× Today I can't live without my smartphone, so checking the list on my phone is very convenient and also it can uh. Makes me more quicker and faster to complete my work on time.

✓ Today I can't live without my smartphone, so checking the list on my phone is very convenient, and it can also make me quicker and faster to complete my work on time.

“and also it can uh. Makes”结构不正确，应调整为“and it can also make”。

× Today I can't live without my smartphone, so checking the list on my phone is very convenient and also it can uh. Makes me more quicker and faster to complete my work on time.

✓ Today I can't live without my smartphone, so checking the list on my phone is very convenient, and it can also make me quicker and faster to complete my work on time.

“more quicker”是错误的比较级表达，应去掉“more”，直接用“quicker”。