List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan alami, namun Anda bisa menambahkan variasi kosakata dan menghindari pengulangan kata seperti 'list' dengan sinonim atau frasa lain untuk membuat jawaban lebih menarik dan alami.

예시: Yes, I always prepare a shopping list beforehand because it prevents me from making impulsive buys. Having a clear plan allows me to concentrate on purchasing only necessary items, which saves both time and money. For instance, last week I completed my shopping swiftly by adhering strictly to my plan and avoiding distractions.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta pengucapan yang mengganggu pemahaman. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren dan mudah dimengerti.

예시: Yes, I always prepare a detailed list before shopping because it helps me avoid impulsive purchases and stay organized. By having a clear plan, I can focus on buying only the necessary items, which not only saves time but also helps me manage my budget more effectively.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap serta jelas untuk menjelaskan alasan mengapa beberapa orang tidak suka membuat daftar.

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because it takes time and they prefer to be more flexible. They may want to decide spontaneously and not be restricted by a fixed plan.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, namun ada beberapa kesalahan kecil dalam tata bahasa dan pengucapan. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih lancar dan perhatikan penggunaan kata yang tepat agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami.

예시: I prefer making my shopping list on my phone because it is very convenient and flexible. Since I always carry my phone, I can easily add or check items anytime and anywhere. For example, when I go shopping, I can quickly update my list without needing to carry extra paper.

× They're having a clear list I can for cues.

✓ By having a clear list, I can use it as a cue.

The original sentence uses 'They're having' incorrectly and lacks clarity. The correct phrase is 'By having a clear list,' which properly introduces the idea. Also, 'I can for cues' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'I can use it as a cue' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Which not only saved my time but also helps me management budget more effectively.

✓ This not only saves me time but also helps me manage my budget more effectively.

The original sentence starts with 'Which' incorrectly, creating a sentence fragment. Also, the verb tenses are inconsistent ('saved' and 'helps'). The corrected sentence uses 'This' to start a complete sentence and aligns the verbs in the present tense to match the context.

× Sometimes making lease is also taking time.

✓ Sometimes making a list also takes time.

The word 'lease' is incorrect; it should be 'list.' Also, 'is also taking time' is awkward; the simple present 'takes time' is more appropriate here to express a general truth.

× So maybe some people that is a flexible people won't be listing a something that way because they want.

✓ So maybe some people who are flexible won't make a list that way because they want to be spontaneous.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun usage ('that is a flexible people') and awkward phrasing ('won't be listing a something'). The correction uses 'who are flexible' to refer to people properly and clarifies the meaning with 'won't make a list that way because they want to be spontaneous.'

× Spite everything that they see.

✓ They prefer to buy whatever they see.

The original sentence 'Spite everything that they see' is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete sentence that conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer making this on my phone because it is very convenient and flexible.

✓ I prefer making my list on my phone because it is very convenient and flexible.

The pronoun 'this' is vague. Specifying 'my list' clarifies what is being made on the phone.

× I always carry my phone with me right so I can easily add our check item any times and anywhere.

✓ I always carry my phone with me, so I can easily add or check items anytime and anywhere.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns ('our' instead of 'or') and awkward phrasing ('any times'). The correction fixes these errors and improves clarity.