List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but avoid repetition such as "makes it makes it". Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember things, and I write it down on a piece of paper, which makes shopping more convenient."

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need, and I write it down on a piece of paper, which makes the process more convenient and organised.

제안: Your answer is good and mostly clear, but you can improve sentence structure and use linking words for coherence. For example, instead of "It does help planning my day," say "It helps me plan my day effectively." Also, connect ideas with words like "and" or "which".

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. Whenever I start my day at the office, I open my notes and jot down the tasks I need to complete. This helps me plan my day effectively and prepare strategies to tackle each problem I might face.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. Avoid short, incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "It usually depends on the person. Some may not like planning their day, while others find making a list stressful because seeing all the tasks can be overwhelming."

예시: It usually depends on the person. Some people may not like to plan their day, while others find making a list stressful because seeing all the tasks written down can be overwhelming and confusing.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by combining sentences and correcting grammar. Use linking words like "because" and avoid short fragments. For example, "I usually use both methods because writing tasks on paper helps me think better, while I use my phone for shopping lists when I go out."

예시: I usually use both methods because when I start my day, I write down my tasks on paper, which helps me think more clearly. However, I use my phone to make lists when I go out shopping for groceries or other items.

× I also write it down in a piece of paper that makes it makes it convenient.

✓ I also write it down on a piece of paper which makes it convenient.

The correct preposition to use with 'a piece of paper' is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'that makes it makes it' is repetitive; it should be 'which makes it'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So whenever I start my day in office, I usually open my notes and jot down the points I need to do for today.

✓ So whenever I start my day at the office, I usually open my notes and jot down the points I need to do for today.

The correct preposition to use with 'office' in this context is 'at' not 'in'. 'At the office' is the standard phrase to indicate location of work.

× It does help planning my day and also preparing strategies to tackle each problem I have.

✓ It does help in planning my day and also in preparing strategies to tackle each problem I have.

The verb 'help' when followed by a noun or gerund requires the preposition 'in' to indicate the activity being helped. So, 'help in planning' and 'help in preparing' are correct.

× It usually depends person to person.

✓ It usually depends on the person.

The phrase 'depends person to person' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'depends on the person' to indicate variability among individuals.

× Or maybe making a list is too much? Stressful for them becauses whenever you see the points in front of you, you usually get. Baffled.

✓ Or maybe making a list is too much, stressful for them because whenever you see the points in front of you, you usually get baffled.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains punctuation errors. Combining the fragments into one sentence with correct punctuation improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That helps me think. A lot better an I use my phone whenever I have to go out and buy some groceries or stuff like that.

✓ That helps me think a lot better and I use my phone whenever I have to go out and buy some groceries or stuff like that.

The sentence is incorrectly split and contains a typo 'an' instead of 'and'. Correcting the conjunction and merging the sentence improves flow and grammar.