List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain the benefits of making a list with specific details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, it saves time since I don't have to wander around the store looking for items. Also, it helps me avoid buying unnecessary things, which saves money.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and grammar errors. Use clear and correct sentences, and link your ideas smoothly. Provide specific examples and explain how making lists helps your work.

예시: Yes, I always make a list before starting work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently. For instance, when I worked at a small restaurant, I made lists of ingredients to buy, ensuring I didn't forget anything. This approach saved both time and money.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear expressions. Focus on clear reasons why some people avoid making lists, and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember what they need. For example, when shopping, they recall items without writing them down. Also, some find making lists time-consuming and prefer to shop spontaneously.

제안: Your answer is good but has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use complete sentences and correct vocabulary. Explain clearly why you prefer phone lists and give specific examples with linking words.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient to carry. With modern technology, I can access my list instantly and update it easily by clicking a few buttons. For example, I can quickly add or remove items without worrying about losing a paper list.

× Uh, did a lot of benefits when we are making list, First of all, it is very easy to find out, but you need apart from that, the IT is time saving the case right now, time is money we can save.

✓ Uh, there are a lot of benefits when we make a list. First of all, it is very easy to find things. Apart from that, it saves time because time is money and we can save it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'did' instead of 'there are' to indicate existence, which is a 'There be issue' but mainly the phrase 'when we are making list' should be 'when we make a list' to correctly use the verb form. Also, 'making list' lacks an article and plural form. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity and correct verb forms.

× Uh, did a lot of benefits when we are making list, First of all, it is very easy to find out, but you need apart from that, the IT is time saving the case right now, time is money we can save.

✓ Uh, there are a lot of benefits when we make a list. First of all, it is very easy to find things. Apart from that, it saves time because time is money and we can save it.

The phrase 'did a lot of benefits' is incorrect because 'did' is not used to express existence. The correct form is 'there are a lot of benefits' to indicate the presence of benefits. This is a common 'There be issue' where 'there is/are' should be used to state existence.

× I do make a list when I go to shop.

✓ I do make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect because 'shop' as a verb does not require 'to' when used with 'go'. The correct expression is 'go shopping' which uses the gerund form after 'go' to indicate the activity.

× when we are making list

✓ when we are making a list

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Omitting the article causes a singular/plural issue.

× I often need to buy some ingredients so I have him for having a list in sure I don't forget anything.

✓ I often need to buy some ingredients so I have it; having a list ensures I don't forget anything.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrectly used to refer to 'a list', which is an inanimate object and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.

× This method save a lot of time and money because I can shop efficiently and then say.

✓ This method saves a lot of time and money because I can shop efficiently and then save.

The verb 'save' should be in the third person singular present tense 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'method'. Also, 'then say' is a typo and should be 'then save' to make sense in context.

× This method save a lot of time and money because I can shop efficiently and then say.

✓ This method saves a lot of time and money because I can shop efficiently and then save.

The subject 'method' is singular, so the verb should be 'saves' not 'save' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× some people don't like to make new words with 'cause they have a short memory

✓ some people don't like to make new words because they have a short memory

The phrase 'make new words with 'cause' is incorrect and unclear. The word 'with' is unnecessary and 'cause' should be 'because' to properly connect the clauses.

× I often need to buy some ingredients so I have him for having a list in sure I don't forget anything.

✓ I often need to buy some ingredients so I have it; having a list ensures I don't forget anything.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrectly used to refer to 'a list', which is an inanimate object and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'in sure' is incorrect and should be 'ensures'.

× some people fine making this time consuming and prefer to lie on the natural world.

✓ some people find making lists time-consuming and prefer to rely on their natural memory.

The word 'fine' is a typo and should be 'find'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. 'Lie on the natural world' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'rely on their natural memory'.

× prefer to lie on the natural world.

✓ prefer to rely on their natural memory.

The phrase 'lie on the natural world' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'rely on' when talking about depending on something, and 'natural memory' fits the context better.

× I can access my lowest instantly and update them easily by just clicking that couple of buttons.

✓ I can access my lists instantly and update them easily by just clicking a couple of buttons.

'Lowest' is a typo and should be 'lists'. Also, 'that couple of buttons' is incorrect; it should be 'a couple of buttons'. The pronoun 'them' correctly refers to 'lists'.

× I prefer to make the list on my phone because it is much more. Convenient to carry.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because it is much more convenient to carry.

The period after 'more' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. 'More convenient' should be together without interruption.