List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan hindari pengulangan atau kata yang tidak perlu. Misalnya, gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dan tambahkan detail yang spesifik dengan kata penghubung yang tepat.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me prioritize the items I need to buy. This way, I can save both time and money instead of wandering around the store without a plan.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan manfaat membuat daftar pekerjaan dengan lebih jelas dan spesifik.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work every day, and it really helps me remember my tasks. As a result, my time management has improved, and I can work more efficiently, which benefits both me and my coworkers.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan efektif. Jelaskan alasan dengan detail yang spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

예시: I think some people avoid making lists because it can be time-consuming. They have to plan their entire day, which can feel tiring and stressful sometimes.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan ejaan, serta buat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan alami. Jelaskan alasan preferensi dengan detail yang spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it feels very satisfying to mark off each completed task. It gives me a sense of accomplishment and motivates me to keep going.

× Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because please can help me prioritize what thing I should buy first.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it can help me prioritize which things I should buy first.

The pronoun 'please' is incorrect here; it should be 'it' to refer to the list. Also, 'what thing' should be 'which things' to correctly refer to multiple items.

× It helped me to save my time and money so every time I go shopping, I. Don just walk around and. Wondering.

✓ It helps me save my time and money, so every time I go shopping, I don't just walk around and wonder.

The verb tense should be present tense 'helps' to match the habitual action. 'Don' is a typo for 'don't'. 'Wondering' should be 'wonder' to match the verb form after 'and'.

× Of course I make a list for my work and it really helped me because it can tell me what to do in the day so I turn forgetting what things to do and my job is scaring better.

✓ Of course I make a list for my work and it really helps me because it tells me what to do during the day so I stop forgetting what things to do and my job is getting better.

The verb tense should be present tense 'helps' and 'tells' to indicate habitual action. 'Turn forgetting' is incorrect; it should be 'stop forgetting'. 'Scaring better' is incorrect; it should be 'getting better'.

× My time management is getting better and it's good for me an all my Co work.

✓ My time management is getting better and it's good for me and all my co-workers.

'An' should be 'and'. 'Co work' is incorrect; the correct term is 'co-workers'.

× I think why some people avoid making list is because it sometimes it can be time-consuming making a list it.

✓ I think some people avoid making lists because sometimes it can be time-consuming.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and repeated words. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× Means you have to think about what you want to do a whole day and sometimes it can be tired, tiring too.

✓ It means you have to think about what you want to do for the whole day and sometimes it can be tiring too.

'Tired' is an adjective describing a person, but here the correct form is 'tiring' to describe the activity causing tiredness. Also, 'for the whole day' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I prefer to make a lease on paper because it really satisfying when I marked off every things that I have done so.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it is really satisfying when I mark off everything that I have done.

'Lease' is a typo for 'list'. 'It really satisfying' should be 'it is really satisfying' to include the verb 'is'. 'Marked off' should be 'mark off' to maintain present tense. 'Every things' should be 'everything'.

× It's feels very kid is feels like I have done a good job.

✓ It feels very good; it feels like I have done a good job.

'It's feels' is incorrect; it should be 'It feels'. 'Very kid is' is a typo for 'very good'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.