List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. For example, explain how making a list helps you remember items and stay organized.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, by having a list, I avoid forgetting important items and can shop more efficiently.

제안: Improve your answer by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and be more specific about how lists help you with your academic work.

예시: Yes, I usually make lists for my academic work because they help me organize my tasks. Moreover, by scheduling my work, I can complete it regularly and avoid last-minute stress.

제안: Focus on clarity and coherence by using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like 'list billboards' and explain reasons clearly and specifically.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find the process boring and time-consuming. Additionally, they feel that lists limit their creativity, so they prefer to work without them.

제안: Make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and using linking words. Also, correct minor grammar errors and provide a clear reason for your preference.

예시: Nowadays, most people, including me, always have their phones with them. Therefore, I prefer to make lists on my phone because I often forget paper, but I never forget my phone.

× Yes, I prefer to make list whenever I go for shopping because it helps me to keep my things remember and due to which I didn't forget to take.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make lists whenever I go shopping because it helps me remember my things and ensures I don't forget to take anything.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of making a list. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The phrase 'keep my things remember' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember my things'. The phrase 'due to which I didn't forget to take' is awkward and incorrect; it is better expressed as 'ensures I don't forget to take anything'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× An I didn't forgot to take anything and that has me to show up in a well manner.

✓ And I didn't forget to take anything, and that helps me to show up in a well-mannered way.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense, but after 'didn't' the base form 'forget' should be used. 'An' is a typo and should be 'And'. The phrase 'has me to show up in a well manner' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me to show up in a well-mannered way' to convey the intended meaning properly.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list for my academique work because by making a list I am able to organize my work and by making schedules it'll become easy for me to do my work on regular basis.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list for my academic work because by making a list I am able to organize my work, and by making schedules, it becomes easy for me to do my work on a regular basis.

The word 'academique' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'academic'. The phrase 'it'll become easy' should be 'it becomes easy' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'on regular basis' should be 'on a regular basis' to include the necessary article.

× Well, some people hate making list billboards, they find it quite boring and time-consuming process and they think that it is a waste of time by making a list and take it with them and it also.

✓ Well, some people hate making lists; they find it quite boring and a time-consuming process, and they think that it is a waste of time to make a list and take it with them.

The phrase 'making list billboards' is unclear and likely incorrect; assuming 'list billboards' is a mistake, it should be 'making lists'. The sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation. 'Time-consuming process' requires an article 'a'. The phrase 'by making a list and take it with them' is incorrect; it should be 'to make a list and take it with them' to use the correct infinitive form.

× It also stuck their creativity level due to which they don't didn't prefer to make list.

✓ It also stifles their creativity, which is why they don't prefer to make lists.

The verb 'stuck' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'stifles'. The phrase 'don't didn't' is incorrect; only one auxiliary verb should be used, here 'don't' is appropriate. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural consistency. The phrase 'due to which' is awkward; 'which is why' is clearer.

× In this day, mostly people are addicted to their phone and I think their phone is always in their hand and I'm one of them.

✓ Nowadays, most people are addicted to their phones, and I think their phone is always in their hand, and I'm one of them.

The phrase 'In this day' is better expressed as 'Nowadays'. 'Mostly people' should be 'most people'. 'Their phone' should be 'their phones' to agree with plural 'people'. 'In their hand' should be 'in their hands' to match plural possessors.

× So I prefer to make list on my phone instead of paper because I think sometimes I forget to take the paper with me, but I can't forget my phone.

✓ So I prefer to make lists on my phone instead of paper because I think sometimes I forget to take paper with me, but I can't forget my phone.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate multiple lists. 'The paper' is unnecessary here; 'take paper with me' is more natural when referring to paper in general.