List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid redundancy and improve fluency by combining ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I think it's unnecessary. However, recently I've been considering changing this habit since I often forget items and have to return to the store.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain reasons and improve coherence.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list for my work, although I realize I should. Because I've been struggling to keep up with my tasks, I think making a list would help me stay organized.

제안: Avoid repeating ideas and improve clarity by structuring your answer logically. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and worry that if they lose the list, they might forget important tasks. Instead, they prefer using notes on their phones, which are more convenient and less likely to be lost.

제안: Improve fluency by avoiding pauses and filler words. Use linking words to compare options clearly and provide specific reasons.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I can check them anytime, and they are less likely to be damaged or lost. Paper lists can easily get wet or misplaced, which makes digital lists more reliable.

× I don't make her list 'cause I think it's useless.

✓ I don't make a list 'cause I think it's useless.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used here. The correct article is 'a' to refer to a general list. Using 'her' implies possession which is not intended in this context.

× I often. Forget some of this stuff and then I have to go back and get them.

✓ I often forget some of this stuff and then I have to go back and get it.

The verb 'forget' should be in present tense without a period interrupting the sentence. Also, 'them' is incorrect because 'stuff' is uncountable and should be referred to as 'it'.

× No, I don't make her less per work, although I should.

✓ No, I don't make a list for work, although I should.

The phrase 'her less per work' is incorrect. It should be 'a list for work'. 'Her' and 'less' are misused here, likely due to mishearing or typo.

× 'Cause they the I've been struggling with keeping up with my work and I think it would be a really good idea to start making a list.

✓ 'Cause I've been struggling with keeping up with my work and I think it would be a really good idea to start making a list.

The phrase 'they the' is nonsensical and disrupts sentence structure. Removing it corrects the sentence and clarifies meaning.

× Because because if you lose it or anything I have to redo in, you're going to forget some stuff.

✓ Because if you lose it or anything, you have to redo it, and you're going to forget some stuff.

The repeated 'because' is redundant. Also, the phrase 'I have to redo in' is incorrect; it should be 'you have to redo it'. Adding conjunctions improves sentence flow.

× But if I do make a list on paper, like anything could happen to their paper.

✓ But if I do make a list on paper, anything could happen to the paper.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used to refer to 'paper'. The correct article is 'the' since it refers to a specific paper mentioned earlier.