List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了购物时列清单的习惯，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，如“mega list”和“the watcher”。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember essential items like milk and water, and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“bite your thumb”和“make my plans seems clearly”。建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并解释为什么有时不喜欢列清单。

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work to organize my tasks clearly and work more efficiently. However, sometimes I prefer flexibility and don't follow strict plans.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“worry trouble thing to do”和“very strictly plan”。建议用更自然的表达说明原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome and prefer not to spend time on strict plans. They also want to have flexible time to do other things they enjoy.

제안: 回答表达了偏好，但有语法错误和重复，如“take my phone every year”和“take a little adjust”。建议使用更准确的词汇和时态，简洁表达理由。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and it's convenient to write and easily edit my lists anytime.

× Yes, I definitely need to make a little before I want to go shopping because mega list to help me to remember what I need to buy such as milk or the watcher and it also can help me to avoid the unnecessary things to buy.

✓ Yes, I definitely need to make a list before I want to go shopping because a mega list helps me to remember what I need to buy such as milk or the water, and it also can help me to avoid buying unnecessary things.

这里“a little”应改为“a list”，因为需要表达“一个清单”，而不是“少量”。“mega list”前缺少冠词“a”。“watcher”应为“water”。“things to buy”前应加动词“buy”，使句子完整。

× Yes, I definitely need to make a little before I want to go shopping because mega list to help me to remember what I need to buy such as milk or the watcher and it also can help me to avoid the unnecessary things to buy.

✓ Yes, I definitely need to make a list before I want to go shopping because a mega list helps me to remember what I need to buy such as milk or water, and it also can help me to avoid buying unnecessary things.

“the watcher”中的“the”使用错误，应去掉或改为“water”。“the unnecessary things”中“the”不合适，改为“unnecessary things”。

× Yes, I like to make some list for my work in order to bite your thumb.

✓ Yes, I like to make some lists for my work in order to organize my tasks.

“bite your thumb”是错误表达，可能是误用，应改为表达“组织任务”或“理清计划”。

× Yes, I like to make some list for my work in order to bite your thumb.

✓ Yes, I like to make some lists for my work in order to organize my tasks.

“some list”应为复数形式“some lists”，因为“some”后面通常接复数名词。

× In order to make my plans seems clearly and make me to do my work more efficiently.

✓ In order to make my plans seem clear and help me do my work more efficiently.

“seems”应为原形“seem”，因为前面有“make”作使役动词，后面动词用原形。“clearly”应改为形容词“clear”修饰“plans”。“make me to do”中“to”应去掉。

× But sometimes I don't think it is work for me because I really freedom and want to make a flexible work.

✓ But sometimes I don't think it works for me because I really want freedom and want to have flexible work.

“it is work”应为“it works”，表示“有效”。“I really freedom”缺少动词，应为“I really want freedom”。“make a flexible work”应改为“have flexible work”，因为“work”不可数。

× Well, I think mostly it may because of the worry trouble thing to do and they don't want to spend time on these very strictly plan and they may also want to have some flexible time for them to do anything else they want and more like to do.

✓ Well, I think mostly it may be because of the worrying troublesome things to do and they don't want to spend time on very strict plans, and they may also want to have some flexible time to do anything else they want and like to do more.

“worry trouble thing”应为“worrying troublesome things”，形容词修饰名词。“these very strictly plan”应为“very strict plans”，形容词和名词复数形式。句子结构复杂，需调整使表达更清晰。

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my phone every year and it is very convenient for me to write on the phone or I want to take a little adjust on it.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere and it is very convenient for me to write on the phone or make a little adjustment on it.

“take my phone every year”应为“take my phone everywhere”，表达携带手机到处。 “take a little adjust”应为“make a little adjustment”，动词搭配错误。

× It was very convenient.

✓ It is very convenient.

时态错误，描述现在的便利性应使用现在时“is”，而非过去时“was”。