List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，且内容不够连贯。建议练习用简单明了的句子表达购物清单的内容，并注意语法和拼写。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on paper before I go shopping. For example, I write down items like cookies, cooking ingredients, and some sauces to make sure I don't forget anything.

제안: 回答内容不明确且语法混乱，难以理解。建议先明确是否制作工作清单，然后用简单句子说明原因和效果。

예시: I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to remember tasks in my mind. However, sometimes I write down important tasks to help me stay organized.

제안: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，表达不清楚。建议用简单句子说明人们不喜欢做清单的原因，如习惯或心情影响。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be flexible and follow their mood. Also, some people find lists boring or unnecessary.

제안: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用不当。建议用简单句子说明偏好，并举例说明手机应用的便利性。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my smartphone because it is convenient. I use apps to record my schedule and shopping lists, which helps me stay organized.

× I firstly find some paper to make a list about shopping thing.

✓ I firstly find some paper to make a list about shopping things.

shopping thing 应为复数形式 shopping things，因为这里指的是多种购物物品。

× So like by some cookie. Cooking ingredients and some sores.

✓ So like buying some cookies, cooking ingredients and some sauces.

cookie 应为复数 cookies，表示多种饼干；sores 可能是拼写错误，应为 sauces（调味品）。

× Actually I'm not sure about the list is just a basic fake because I don't have any habits of linkable itself my work.

✓ Actually, I'm not sure if the list is just a basic fake because I don't have any habit of linking it to my work.

句子结构混乱，需调整为更通顺的表达，linkable 应改为 linking it，表示将清单与工作关联。

× Especially when I really I'll do some work.

✓ Especially when I really have to do some work.

句子不完整且时态错误，'I'll do' 应改为 'have to do' 表示必须做某事。

× In my company or? Some specific task is so.

✓ In my company, or for some specific tasks, it is so.

句子不完整且断句错误，需补充完整表达。

× Actually I think it's a Troy depends on some individuals habits and mood.

✓ Actually, I think it depends on some individuals' habits and mood.

'a Troy' 无意义，应删除；'depends' 是谓语动词，前面不需要 'it's a'。

× For some people computer with just serve.

✓ For some people, computers just serve.

computer 应为复数 computers；句子缺少谓语，调整为完整句子。

× Are crowding to their mood or.

✓ are according to their mood, or

'crowding' 拼写错误，应为 'according'，表示“根据”。

× Fly to see flexible tech timetable there willing to make some ways to guide them.

✓ They prefer a flexible timetable and are willing to make some ways to guide themselves.

句子结构混乱，需调整为完整且通顺的表达。

× Well, actually in recent years I'll writing is my smart phone to record something like make a list or just guide my schedule for the one day.

✓ Well, actually in recent years I have been using my smartphone to record things like making a list or just guiding my schedule for the day.

'I'll writing is' 语法错误，应改为 'I have been using'；'the one day' 应为 'the day'。

× And I think it's so convenient for me to make some ways you some specific app or sound just a user.

✓ And I think it's so convenient for me to use some specific apps or sounds as a user.

句子不通顺，'make some ways you' 无意义，应改为 'use some specific apps or sounds'。