List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Студент должен использовать правильную грамматику и лексику, чтобы ответ был понятен и естественен. Следует избегать неправильных слов и выражений, например, 'do list' и 'go in magazine'. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные фразы, например, 'I don't make a list when I go shopping.'

예시: No, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I usually buy things spontaneously.

제안: Ответ должен быть структурированным и понятным. Студенту нужно использовать связные предложения и правильную грамматику. Следует ясно ответить на вопрос и объяснить, как список помогает в работе.

예시: Yes, I make lists at work because I work in a restaurant. Making lists helps me organize my tasks and remember important duties.

제안: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и содержит много ошибок. Студенту нужно понять вопрос и дать логичный ответ с объяснением причин, почему некоторые люди не любят составлять списки.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or prefer to remember things without writing them down.

제안: Ответ должен быть ясным и логичным. Студенту следует использовать правильные слова и грамматику, а также объяснить свой выбор с поддерживающими деталями.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit them whenever I want.

× No, I don't do list when I go in magazine.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping.

The verb 'do' is incorrect here; the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'go in magazine' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The verb 'make' should be used with 'list' and 'shopping' is the correct noun for the activity.

× No, I don't do list when I go in magazine.

✓ No, I don't make lists when I go shopping.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' if referring to the general activity of making lists. Also, 'go in magazine' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'.

× Yes, I. Make least in my work does I work in ITI work in a restaurant IUS list.

✓ Yes, I make lists at my work. I work in ITI and in a restaurant, so I use lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb forms. 'Make least' should be 'make lists'. The sentence needs to be split for clarity. 'IUS list' is unclear and corrected to 'I use lists'.

× Yes, I. Make least in my work does I work in ITI work in a restaurant IUS list.

✓ Yes, I make lists at my work. I work at ITI and in a restaurant, so I use lists.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'work' and 'ITI'. The correct preposition is 'at' for workplaces like ITI. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I think many people like. Many people like making pleased and go in VIRG and Going magazine. Many people like make a list.

✓ Yes, I think many people like making lists and going shopping. Many people like to make lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains nonsensical phrases like 'making pleased' and 'go in VIRG and Going magazine'. These are corrected to meaningful phrases 'making lists' and 'going shopping'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, I think many people like. Many people like making pleased and go in VIRG and Going magazine. Many people like make a list.

✓ Yes, I think many people like making lists and going shopping. Many people like to make lists.

Incorrect prepositions and phrases are replaced with correct ones: 'going shopping' instead of 'go in VIRG and Going magazine'. The phrase 'making pleased' is incorrect and replaced with 'making lists'.

× I like U's phone from very relaxed form and list. No, I don't use list.

✓ I like using my phone because it is very convenient for making lists. No, I don't use paper lists.

The pronoun 'U's' is incorrect and replaced with 'my'. The phrase 'from very relaxed form and list' is unclear and corrected to 'because it is very convenient for making lists'. Also, 'list' is pluralized and clarified.