List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 구체적인 내용을 포함하고, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket. For example, I write down items like chicken and vegetables that I need for the week.

제안: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work every three days. It usually helps me stay organized, but sometimes plans change quickly, so the list doesn't always work.

제안: 의견을 표현하려는 시도는 좋으나 문장이 불완전하고 어색합니다. 자신의 생각을 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: In my opinion, it depends on a person's personality. Some people like to feel free when they work, so they don't make lists. Others feel nervous if they don't have a list to follow.

제안: 답변이 다소 혼란스럽고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 선호 이유를 명확히 하고, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper. When I work at a company, I use a notebook to write my list because I can easily cross off tasks when I finish them, which feels satisfying.

× Yes, when I go to supermarket on iOS Catalyst for what I will buy this week for this week like chicken or any vegetables.

✓ Yes, when I go to the supermarket, I use iOS Catalyst to plan what I will buy this week, like chicken or vegetables.

The sentence has incorrect preposition usage and article omission. 'Go to supermarket' should be 'go to the supermarket' because 'supermarket' is a countable noun requiring an article. 'On iOS Catalyst' is incorrect; it should be 'I use iOS Catalyst' to indicate the app usage. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Yes, I am Mac Alicia for my work after three days an. Definitely it always work, but sometimes you know Chan Chan changes more quickly than hot. I plan Yep. So sometimes it doesn't work.

✓ Yes, I use Mac Alicia for my work after three days. Definitely, it always works, but sometimes, you know, plans change more quickly than expected. So sometimes it doesn't work.

The original sentence contains unclear pronoun usage and some nonsensical phrases. 'I am Mac Alicia' is incorrect; likely intended 'I use Mac Alicia'. 'Chan Chan changes more quickly than hot' is unclear and corrected to 'plans change more quickly than expected'. Also, subject-verb agreement corrected ('it always work' to 'it always works').

× For my opinion. I think it depends on everyone's. Personality, Anne. You know some somebody likes. Feel free them when they work and somebody feel nervous if they don't make a list for work. So. It.

✓ In my opinion, I think it depends on everyone's personality. You know, some people like to feel free when they work, and some feel nervous if they don't make a list for work.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and article usage. 'For my opinion' should be 'In my opinion'. 'Everyone's. Personality, Anne.' is fragmented and unclear; corrected to 'everyone's personality'. 'Somebody likes. Feel free them' is incorrect; corrected to 'some people like to feel free'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to Michael is on paper actually, I when I work at a company, I have a note to make my list an 'cause I can, you know, I can if I finish the thing on the list, I can just cross it down. So it's really. Nice.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper actually. When I work at a company, I have a notebook to make my list because I can, you know, if I finish something on the list, I can just cross it out. So it's really nice.

The sentence contains incorrect pronoun and word usage. 'I prefer to Michael is on paper' is incorrect; corrected to 'I prefer to make lists on paper'. 'I have a note to make my list' corrected to 'I have a notebook to make my list'. 'Cross it down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cross it out'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.