List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง จากนั้นเสริมรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างมีเหตุผล เช่น อธิบายว่าการทำรายการช่วยให้คุณจัดการได้ดีขึ้นอย่างไร และหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์หรือสับสน

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list, especially when I moved abroad to study in Australia. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, I can plan my meals better and avoid buying unnecessary things.

제안: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น เริ่มด้วยการตอบคำถามโดยตรง จากนั้นอธิบายวิธีการทำรายการงานและผลลัพธ์ที่ได้ ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่ชัดเจนหรือผิดไวยากรณ์

예시: It depends on the type of work. For important meetings and deadlines, I usually write notes on my calendar. This method works well because I can prepare in advance, sometimes a week or two days before the event.

제안: ควรตอบคำถามอย่างชัดเจนและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างมีเหตุผล เช่น อธิบายเหตุผลที่คนบางคนไม่ชอบทำรายการ และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจน

예시: Some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time and mental effort. They have to organize their thoughts, which can be tiring and stressful.

제안: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกันดีขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถาม จากนั้นเสริมเหตุผลและตัวอย่างที่ชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลและหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. It helps me remember important tasks, like meetings at specific times or essays that need to be submitted on the same day.

× I'm someone who always makes the shopping list, especially when I had to move abroad, like when I'm studying in Australia.

✓ I'm someone who always makes the shopping list, especially when I have to move abroad, like when I'm studying in Australia.

The sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present context. Since the action refers to a general or current situation, 'have' (present tense) is appropriate to maintain tense consistency.

× By having a list helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any important items so it may only produce.

✓ Having a list helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any important items.

The original sentence has incorrect structure with 'By having a list helps me'. Removing 'By' corrects the sentence structure. Also, 'so it may only produce' is unclear and unnecessary, so it is omitted for clarity.

× So it depends on each types of work.

✓ So it depends on each type of work.

The phrase 'each types' is incorrect because 'each' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'type'.

× So for your meetings an important deadlines for important assignments I usually make nose on my calendar.

✓ So for meetings and important deadlines for important assignments, I usually make notes on my calendar.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'your' and 'nose'. 'Your' should be omitted to refer generally, and 'nose' is a typo for 'notes'. Also, 'an' before 'important deadlines' is incorrect; it should be omitted.

× So it definitely works re 'cause I said it out too. Two other. On a week in advance and also in two days in at once.

✓ So it definitely works because I set it out too, two other times: a week in advance and also two days before.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 're 'cause' should be 'because', 'said it out' should be 'set it out', and the timing expressions are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I will say that it. Spends a lot of time to make lists.

✓ I will say that it takes a lot of time to make lists.

The phrase 'it spends a lot of time' is incorrect; 'it takes a lot of time' is the correct expression to indicate duration required for an activity.

× Like you have to reorganize things on your mind in order to list our other things that you have to do.

✓ Like you have to reorganize things in your mind in order to list other things that you have to do.

The phrase 'on your mind' should be 'in your mind'. 'list our other things' is incorrect; it should be 'list other things'.

× Wish requires a lot of cognitive resources.

✓ Which requires a lot of cognitive resources.

'Wish' is a typo; the correct word is 'which' to refer back to the previous idea.

× That makes my, makes you.

✓ That makes me tired and stressed.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'me tired and stressed' clarifies the intended meaning.

× I prefer more to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient for me. To remind myself on what to do next like.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient for me to remind myself of what to do next, like

The phrase 'prefer more to make' is awkward; 'prefer to make' is correct. Also, 'remind myself on' should be 'remind myself of'.

× I have meeting at this certain times or having some important essays that happened to be submitted within today.

✓ I have meetings at certain times or some important essays that have to be submitted today.

'Meeting' should be plural 'meetings' to match 'times'. 'Happened to be submitted within today' is incorrect; 'have to be submitted today' is correct.