List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "ensures me" and "helps me to memorize everything" which convey similar ideas. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and avoid forgetting anything.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by avoiding filler words like "uh" and by using clearer linking words. Also, try to use more natural phrasing and correct tense usage.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because it's manageable. However, I plan to start making lists in the future when my workload increases.

제안: Your answer is understandable but the vocabulary and sentence structure can be improved. Avoid negative words like "lazy" which may sound harsh. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific reasons.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary or prefer to rely on their good memory. Additionally, they might feel confident managing tasks without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is relevant and clear but can be more natural by using simpler expressions and linking words. Also, avoid repeating "mobile phone" twice in the same sentence.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because technology makes it easier and more convenient than using paper.

× So making a list helps me to memorize everything.

✓ So making a list helps me memorize everything.

The verb 'helps' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Using 'to memorize' after 'helps' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'helps me memorize'. This is a common pattern in English where 'help' can be followed by either the base verb or 'to' plus the verb, but in this context, the base verb is preferred.

× I make a list when I go for shop as it ensures me that I don't forget anything important.

✓ I make a list when I go shopping as it ensures that I don't forget anything important.

The phrase 'go for shop' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'ensures me that' is incorrect; 'ensures that' is the correct form. The verb 'ensure' does not take an indirect object like 'me' in this context.

× But yes, uh, I would definitely try to do it in the future as when my work will be unmanageable.

✓ But yes, uh, I would definitely try to do it in the future when my work becomes unmanageable.

In English, the word 'when' in time clauses is followed by the present tense, not the future tense. Therefore, 'when my work will be unmanageable' should be 'when my work becomes unmanageable'. Also, 'as when' is redundant; 'when' alone suffices.

× It can sound amusing but most of the individuals are lazy and they don't want to make list and apart from that there can be another reason that there's some people have strong memory and they are hard working and they can manage everything by themselves.

✓ It can sound amusing but most individuals are lazy and they don't want to make lists and apart from that there can be another reason that some people have strong memory and they are hardworking and they can manage everything by themselves.

The word 'individuals' is plural, so 'most of the individuals' can be simplified to 'most individuals'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is needed here. 'There's some people' is incorrect; it should be 'there are some people' because 'people' is plural. Also, 'hard working' should be one word 'hardworking'.

× Due to the advancement of technology, it is easy to make list on the mobile phone as compared to using paper.

✓ Due to the advancement of technology, it is easy to make lists on the mobile phone as compared to using paper.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is appropriate here. Also, 'on the mobile phone' is correct preposition usage here.