List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some minor errors and redundancies. For example, "Without the least" should be "Without the list". Also, try to avoid repeating the same idea twice (forgetting items). To improve, focus on using correct phrases and avoid redundancy by combining ideas more effectively.

예시: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. Without a list, I tend to forget some items. After shopping, I check the list to ensure I haven't missed anything.

제안: Your answer covers the question well but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "It helped me" instead of "It helps me" and "this methods" instead of "this method". Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Improving grammar and coherence will enhance your response.

예시: Yes, I always make a list of tasks each morning and paste it on my room wall. This method helps me stay organized and focused, so I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors and confusing phrases, such as "they have Nick" and "Andrew might they think". To improve, focus on clear sentence structure, correct grammar, and relevant vocabulary. Also, provide specific reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I'm not sure, but some people might have a good memory and prefer to remember items without a list. Others may think making a list wastes time because they can recall what they need while shopping.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some spelling and grammar mistakes, such as "becauses", "assessable" (should be "accessible"), and "I right" (should be "I write"). Also, avoid unnecessary words like "them" at the end. Improving accuracy and sentence flow will make your answer more natural.

예시: When I go shopping, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and easily accessible. At home, I write my list on a sticky note and paste it on the wall so I can check off completed tasks. This helps me stay organized in both places.

× Without the least, I often forget the things which I thought to buy.

✓ Without the list, I often forget the things which I thought to buy.

The phrase 'Without the least' is incorrect; it should be 'Without the list' because 'list' is the intended noun and requires the definite article 'the'. 'Least' is a different word and does not fit the context.

× After shopping I usually check the list to make sure I haven't missed anything.

✓ After shopping I usually check the list to make sure I haven't missed anything.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× It helped me to stay organized and.

✓ It helps me to stay organized.

The sentence uses past tense 'helped' incorrectly when referring to a habitual action. Present tense 'helps' is appropriate here to indicate ongoing effect.

× I don't forget anything important and this methods really works well.

✓ I don't forget anything important and these methods really work well.

'This methods' is incorrect because 'methods' is plural and requires the demonstrative pronoun 'these'. Also, 'works' should be 'work' to agree with the plural subject 'methods'.

× this methods really works well.

✓ these methods really work well.

The plural noun 'methods' requires the plural demonstrative 'these' and the plural verb form 'work' to agree in number.

× I can't say definitely why they don't make list, but I think they have sharp memory and they have Nick and remember everything they want to shop.

✓ I can't say definitely why they don't make lists, but I think they have sharp memories and they can remember everything they want to buy.

'Make list' should be plural 'make lists' to match the plural subject 'they'. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' to agree with 'they'. 'Nick' is likely a typo and should be removed or corrected. 'Want to shop' is incorrect; 'want to buy' is appropriate.

× and they have Nick and remember everything they want to shop.

✓ and they can remember everything they want to buy.

'Nick' is an incorrect or misplaced word here. Also, 'want to shop' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'want to buy' when referring to purchasing items.

× Andrew might they think that making list is a waste of time and they can remember everything by looking around the things in the shopping center.

✓ And they might think that making lists is a waste of time and they can remember everything by looking around the things in the shopping centre.

'Andrew' is likely a typo for 'And'. 'Making list' should be 'making lists' to agree with plural sense. 'Shopping center' is acceptable but 'shopping centre' is the Canadian spelling.

× When I go shopping, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone becauses it is convenient and easily assessable and handy.

✓ When I go shopping, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is convenient, easily accessible, and handy.

'Becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. 'Assessable' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'accessible'. Commas are added for clarity in the list.

× However, when I am at my home, I right. My list on a sticky note and paste it on the wall so that I can easily check off the things that I complete them.

✓ However, when I am at home, I write my list on a sticky note and paste it on the wall so that I can easily check off the things that I complete.

'At my home' is better as 'at home'. 'Right.' is a typo for 'write'. The phrase 'check off the things that I complete them' is redundant; 'them' should be removed.

× This way I stay organized both at home.

✓ This way I stay organized both at home and when I go shopping.

The sentence is incomplete; 'both' requires two elements. Adding 'and when I go shopping' completes the comparison.