List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me buy only what I need and saves money."

예시: Yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me buy only what I need and saves money.

제안: Your answer has good content but some sentences are repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Yes, I always make a list to differentiate priority tasks from others, so I can focus on important work first. This helps me stay organized, productive, and on schedule."

예시: Yes, I always make a list to differentiate priority tasks from others, so I can focus on important work first. This helps me stay organized, productive, and on schedule.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitation and some unclear phrasing. Try to be more direct and fluent. For example, "Some people avoid making lists because they believe they can finish their tasks on time without one."

예시: Some people avoid making lists because they believe they can finish their tasks on time without one.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more clearly and complete your sentences. For example, "Due to technological advances and less paper use, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is handy and always with me."

예시: Due to technological advances and less paper use, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is handy and always with me.

× Yes, I make a list when I show go to the shopping that prevents me from spending more money on the other items.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it prevents me from spending more money on other items.

The original sentence has an incorrect phrase 'I show go to the shopping' which is ungrammatical and confusing. The corrected sentence uses the proper phrase 'I go shopping' and connects the clauses with 'because' to clarify the cause-effect relationship.

× I make a list because I can buy which I need and it helps me save my money.

✓ I make a list because I can buy what I need and it helps me save my money.

The phrase 'buy which I need' is incorrect; 'which' is not used to introduce restrictive clauses in this context. The correct relative pronoun is 'what' to indicate 'the things that I need'.

× I make a list because of differentiating the priority things and the normal things.

✓ I make a list to differentiate the priority things from the normal things.

The phrase 'because of differentiating' is incorrect; 'because of' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a verb. Using 'to differentiate' expresses purpose correctly. Also, 'priority things and the normal things' should be connected with 'from' to show contrast.

× That helps me to work on the prioritized things first and then later I work on the other things.

✓ That helps me work on the prioritized things first, and then I work on the other things later.

The phrase 'helps me to work' is acceptable but 'helps me work' is more natural. Also, the sentence is improved by adding a comma before 'and' and repositioning 'later' for clarity.

× As per the development in the technology and there is a less usage of paper so I prefer to make list on phone which is very handy and we carry our phone with our. With with. With, with, with our them.

✓ Due to developments in technology and less use of paper, I prefer to make lists on my phone, which is very handy since we always carry our phones with us.

The phrase 'As per the development in the technology' is awkward; 'Due to developments in technology' is more natural. 'Less usage of paper' should be 'less use of paper.' 'Make list on phone' should be 'make lists on my phone.' The original sentence ends with repeated and incorrect phrases 'with our. With with. With, with, with our them,' which are removed and replaced with a correct phrase 'since we always carry our phones with us.'