List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변에서 문법 오류를 줄이고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'helps me organized' 대신 'helps me stay organized'를 사용하고, 'ensure item forget anything important' 대신 'ensure I don't forget anything important'로 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, I write down all the essentials so I can shop more efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary things.

제안: 'walk'는 아마 'work'의 오타로 보입니다. 문장 연결이 부자연스럽고, 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 연결할 때 연결어를 사용하고, 문법을 정확히 하여 자연스럽게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. When I complete tasks on my list, I feel very satisfied and motivated to keep working efficiently.

제안: 답변이 문법적으로 많이 부정확하고, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 불필요한 단어를 제거하며, 문법 오류를 수정하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because it makes them feel stressed and overwhelmed. Planning everything in detail can be too much for them.

제안: 'writing down for my hand'는 부자연스러운 표현입니다. 'writing it by hand'로 수정하고, 문장을 더 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I prefer to make a list on paper because I'm a bit old-fashioned. Writing it by hand makes me feel more satisfied than typing on my phone.

× Yes, I make a list for shop because it helps me organized an ensure item forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I make a list for shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

'for shop' is incorrect; the correct preposition and form is 'for shopping'. Also, 'organized' needs the verb 'stay' before it, and 'ensure item forget anything important' is incorrect; it should be 'ensure I don't forget anything important'.

× Yes, I make a list for shop because it helps me organized an ensure item forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I make a list for shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

The verb 'organized' should be used with 'stay' to form 'stay organized'. Also, 'ensure' should be followed by a clause with subject and verb, e.g., 'ensure I don't forget'.

× Yes, I make a list for shop because it helps me organized an ensure item forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I make a list for shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

The sentence lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms, making it unclear. Adding 'stay' before 'organized' and restructuring the phrase improves clarity.

× For example I write down essential items.

✓ For example, I write down essential items.

A comma is needed after 'For example' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause.

× Yes, I always make a list for my walk because it helps me more.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me more.

'walk' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'work'. This is likely a typo or mishearing.

× Stay organized and focused.

✓ It helps me stay organized and focused.

The sentence fragment 'Stay organized and focused.' lacks a subject and verb; it should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased as a complete sentence.

× When I complete my task on my list, I feel very satisfied and motivated to keep working efficiently.

✓ When I complete my tasks on my list, I feel very satisfied and motivated to keep working efficiently.

'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple items on a list.

× I think some people that don't like me making list because they feel stressful and depressed.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed and depressed.

'that don't like me making list' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making lists'. Also, 'stressful' describes a situation, 'stressed' describes a feeling.

× I think some people that don't like me making list because they feel stressful and depressed.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed and depressed.

'making list' should be 'making lists' to indicate plural and general practice.

× About it.

✓ They feel stressed and depressed about it.

'About it.' is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence or included properly.

× Free sample Planning everything in detail can makes them feel overwhelmed.

✓ Planning everything in detail can make them feel overwhelmed.

'Free sample' is unrelated and likely an error; 'can makes' should be 'can make' because modal verbs are followed by base form verbs.

× Free sample Planning everything in detail can makes them feel overwhelmed.

✓ Planning everything in detail can make them feel overwhelmed.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'make' should be used, not 'makes'.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I'm a little bit old fashioned, so I like writing down for my hand and it makes me more satisfied than writing down on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I'm a little bit old fashioned, so I like writing by hand and it makes me more satisfied than writing on my phone.

'writing down for my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'writing by hand'. Also, 'writing down on my phone' should be 'writing on my phone'.