List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'in advisor' và 'I've often forget'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I go to the supermarket. It helps me remember exactly what I need and prevents me from wasting time or money on unnecessary items.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh hoặc không liên quan như 'I usually cry'. Hãy sắp xếp câu trả lời theo trình tự logic và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I often make a to-do list for work or study the night before. This helps me stay organized the next day. It really works because ticking off tasks gives me a sense of progress and keeps me focused.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh những từ không phù hợp để truyền đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

예시: From my perspective, some people don't like making lists because they think it's too much effort or too strict. They prefer to do things more freely, depending on how they feel.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Personally, I prefer using my phone because it's always with me. I use a simple note-taking app, so I can easily edit or delete items. However, sometimes I use paper lists when I want to take a break from screens, which helps me relax.

× Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I go to their supermarket.

✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I go to the supermarket.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used here because the speaker is referring to a specific supermarket they go to, not belonging to someone else. The definite article 'the' should be used instead to specify the supermarket.

× It helps me remember exactly what I need in advisor, wasting time or money on unnecessary things.

✓ It helps me remember exactly what I need and avoid wasting time or money on unnecessary things.

The phrase 'in advisor' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence structure is faulty. The correction clarifies the meaning by adding 'and avoid' to connect the ideas properly.

× With all this I've often forget important items.

✓ With all this, I've often forgotten important items.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past participle form 'forgotten' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× Yes I off and make A to do list for work or study tax.

✓ Yes, I often make a to-do list for work or study tasks.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect words ('off', 'A', 'tax'). The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects capitalization and word choice.

× I usually cry.

✓ I usually try.

The word 'cry' is likely a mishearing or typo. 'Try' fits the context better. This correction assumes the intended meaning is 'try'.

× Then the night before so I can be more organized the next day.

✓ Then I make it the night before so I can be more organized the next day.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. The correction adds them to form a complete sentence.

× It really works for me because ticking things off the list gives me a sense of progress and keeps me focused.

✓ It really works for me because ticking things off the list gives me a sense of progress and keeps me focused.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× From my perspective, I think some people feel that making list is too much effort or too strict.

✓ From my perspective, I think some people feel that making a list is too much effort or too strict.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires an article 'a' when singular.

× They might prefer to do things more freedom in frilly depending on how they feel.

✓ They might prefer to do things more freely depending on how they feel.

'Freedom' is a noun, but an adverb 'freely' is needed to modify the verb 'do'. 'Frilly' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo.

× Others my field to check the list once they've made it so if they think it's Elise.

✓ Others may fail to check the list once they've made it, so if they think it's useless.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'my field' should be 'may fail', 'Elise' should be 'useless'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.