List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'helped me' should be 'helps me', and 'avoid by unnecessary things' should be 'avoid buying unnecessary things'. Also, try to keep your answer concise and natural by avoiding redundancy.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. For example, 'As I had to do anything important' is confusing; it should be 'When I have important tasks'. Also, use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas smoothly. Try to be more concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I always make a list because it helps me prioritize important tasks first, so I can complete everything before the deadline.

제안: Your answer has some vocabulary errors and awkward expressions. For example, 'vestige of time' is incorrect; you might say 'a waste of time'. Also, avoid repeating ideas and try to use linking words to improve coherence. Make your sentences clearer and more natural.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time, so they prefer to do tasks spontaneously without planning, which they find more convenient.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and irrelevant phrases like 'Are you sleep well?'. Focus on directly answering the question. Use clear and simple sentences, and avoid repetition. Also, use correct vocabulary and grammar to express your ideas naturally.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it has a convenient note-taking app. Whenever I notice something is missing at home, I quickly add it to the list so I can remember to buy it later.

× Yes, I usually make a list whenever I go for shopping because it helped me to save time and avoid by unnecessary things.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list whenever I go shopping because it helps me save time and avoid unnecessary things.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'helped' (past tense) when the context requires present tense 'helps' to match 'usually make'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The phrase 'avoid by unnecessary things' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid unnecessary things' without 'by'.

× As I had to do anything important so I prioritize my important work first and then I do my non important work.

✓ As I have to do important things, I prioritize my important work first and then I do my non-important work.

The phrase 'had to do anything important' is incorrect in this context; present tense 'have to do important things' fits better. Also, 'non important' should be hyphenated as 'non-important'. The sentence structure is improved by removing 'so' after 'As'.

× Some people do not like to make list because they think it is a vestige of time, so they just perform their work accordingly.

✓ Some people do not like to make lists because they think it is a waste of time, so they just perform their work accordingly.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making lists. Also, 'vestige of time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'waste of time'.

× Whenever they have to do anything, just perform it without making any plans because they think it is a convenient way for them.

✓ Whenever they have to do anything, they just perform it without making any plans because they think it is a convenient way for them.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'they' before 'just perform'. Adding 'they' corrects the sentence structure. The preposition usage is correct here.

× Are you sleep well? First my phone because my phone has application name note taking application which is very convenient app.

✓ Do you sleep well? I prefer my phone first because it has a note-taking application which is a very convenient app.

'Are you sleep well?' is incorrect; the correct question is 'Do you sleep well?'. The sentence 'First my phone because my phone has application name note taking application' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to 'I prefer my phone first because it has a note-taking application'. Also, 'note taking' should be hyphenated as 'note-taking'.

× Whenever I found anything is not available in my home, I just open my open my own note taking app and I'd ride in that app.

✓ Whenever I find anything is not available in my home, I just open my own note-taking app and I write in that app.

'Found' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'find'. The phrase 'I'd ride in that app' is incorrect; it should be 'I write in that app'. Also, 'note taking' should be hyphenated as 'note-taking'.

× Whatever is not available in my home or in my kitchen through this I can buy.

✓ Whatever is not available in my home or kitchen, I can buy through this app.

The original sentence is awkward and lacks clarity. Reordering the sentence and adding 'app' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.