List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“helps me to clear what I must to buy”应改为“helps me to be clear about what I must buy”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay focused and remember everything I need to buy, whether I'm going to the supermarket or a stationery store.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“use the formulating a plan”应为“make a plan”，且“achieve Michael easily”表达不明确。建议使用简单明了的句子，清楚表达观点，并避免拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and stay focused. For example, I plan my day in advance to avoid wasting time and complete my work efficiently.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，如“my mom don't like doesn't like”。建议用更自然的表达方式说明原因，并避免重复。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. For example, my mom prefers not to make lists because she enjoys being spontaneous.

제안: 回答较为自然，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更流畅。建议丰富词汇，使用连接词如“because”或“so that”来增强逻辑性。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, so I can easily add or check tasks anytime. For example, I use reminder apps like Memorandum to keep track of what I need to do.

× I use the formulating a plan to make sure what I need to do during the day.

✓ I use formulating a plan to make sure what I need to do during the day.

这里不需要冠词“the”，因为“formulating a plan”作为动名词短语使用时不需要冠词。

× In my real, making lists makes them feel a sense of control, but they don't like this feeling.

✓ In my view, making lists makes people feel a sense of control, but some don't like this feeling.

“In my real”表达不正确，应为“In my view”表示“在我看来”；“them”指代不明确，改为“people”更清晰。

× For example, my mom don't like doesn't like making lists because she wants to pursue the liberty.

✓ For example, my mom doesn't like making lists because she wants to pursue liberty.

主语“my mom”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用“doesn't like”；“doesn't like”重复出现，应删除一个；“the liberty”中“liberty”作为抽象名词通常不加冠词。