List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'a safe money' nên là 'save money'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list on my phone before I go shopping. I write down everything I need so that I don't forget anything and avoid buying unnecessary items. This helps me save money and stay focused while shopping.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc trình bày câu trả lời mạch lạc, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để truyền đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

예시: To be honest, I usually don't make a detailed list for my work because my tasks are often unplanned and assigned spontaneously by my leader. I quickly note down any new tasks on my phone and try to complete them as soon as possible. This method works well for me.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách nối các ý với nhau bằng các từ nối và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a strict plan. If they don't have any urgent tasks, they might feel that making a list is unnecessary. For example, when their day is free, they might just want to relax without planning.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'I just spoke to my phones so'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient and portable, so I can carry it everywhere. I can quickly add items by typing or even using voice recording, which saves me time. For example, when I'm busy with work, I just speak to my phone to add tasks.

× Yes, I usually make a list on my phone before it goes shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list on my phone before I go shopping.

The phrase 'before it goes shopping' incorrectly uses 'it' and the verb form. The subject should be 'I' to match the speaker, and the verb should be in base form 'go' after 'before' to indicate the action that happens before shopping.

× This helps me a safe money and stay focused while shopping.

✓ This helps me save money and stay focused while shopping.

The phrase 'a safe money' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'save' (not 'safe'), and 'money' is an uncountable noun that does not require an article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'save money'.

× my tasks are often unplanned an assigned spontaneously by my leader in state.

✓ my tasks are often unplanned and assigned spontaneously by my leader in state.

The word 'an' is incorrect here; it should be 'and' to connect two adjectives 'unplanned' and 'assigned'. This is a conjunction error, but since 'Incorrect conjunction use' is problem type 16 and 'an' is a preposition error here, we classify it as preposition error for this context.

× I quickly jumped out any new tasks in my not on my phone and try to.

✓ I quickly jot down any new tasks in my notes on my phone and try to complete them as soon as possible.

The phrase 'jumped out any new tasks in my not on my phone' is incorrect. The intended meaning is to record tasks, so 'jot down' is appropriate. Also, 'not' should be 'notes'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear, so correction includes completing the sentence logically.

× I quickly jumped out any new tasks in my not on my phone and try to.

✓ I quickly jot down any new tasks in my notes on my phone and try to complete them as soon as possible.

The sentence is incomplete and has incorrect verb usage and word choice. 'Jumped out' is incorrect; 'jot down' is the correct phrase for writing notes quickly. Also, 'not' should be 'notes'. The sentence needs to be completed to make sense.

× I reckon that some people. And intro making let's because they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a strict plan or so.

✓ I reckon that some people are introverted about making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a strict plan or so.

The phrase 'And intro making let's' is unclear and incorrect. It likely means 'are introverted about making lists'. The pronoun and word choice are incorrect and need correction for clarity.

× If they don't have any urgent task to complete, they might feel that making a list is unnecessary.

✓ If they don't have any urgent tasks to complete, they might feel that making a list is unnecessary.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'any' which is used with plural countable nouns. This is a singular and plural issue (problem type 1).

× I lean towards the idea of making lists on my phone because it's very convenient and portable so I can carry it everywhere or so.

✓ I lean towards the idea of making lists on my phone because it's very convenient and portable, so I can carry it everywhere.

The phrase 'or so' is unnecessary and informal here, and the sentence needs a comma before 'so' to separate clauses properly. Removing 'or so' improves clarity and formality.

× For example, when burdened with work, I just spoke to my phones so.

✓ For example, when burdened with work, I just speak to my phone.

The phrase 'spoke to my phones so' is incorrect. The verb tense should be present 'speak' to match the habitual action, and 'phones' should be singular 'phone'. The word 'so' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed.