List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I have a party with my friends. Because we need many items, I write them down on the Notes app on my iPhone so I don't forget anything.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về việc không làm danh sách và hậu quả của nó.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list for my work, and as a result, I often forget some important tasks. Therefore, I realize that making a list could help me be more organized.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh nói lặp lại và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. Personally, I prefer to remember my tasks in my mind rather than writing them down.

제안: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời có thể mạch lạc hơn nếu bạn sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để nối các ý. Hãy mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm lý do tại sao bạn thấy tiện lợi khi dùng điện thoại.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my iPhone because it is very convenient. I can create or check my list anytime and anywhere, which helps me stay organized.

× Actually when I have a party with my friends. I will make a list when I shop because we have a lot of items. For shop and I cannot remember that so I need to list. That on my note in iPhone.

✓ Actually, when I have a party with my friends, I make a list when I shop because we have a lot of items to buy and I cannot remember them, so I need to list them on my iPhone notes.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and sentence fragments. 'For shop' is incorrect; it should be 'to buy' or 'when shopping'. Also, 'That on my note in iPhone' is incomplete and unclear. The correction uses proper verb forms and sentence structure to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× No, I don't. I didn't have make a list for my work. That is the reasons. Why I? Usely forgotten something.

✓ No, I don't. I don't make a list for my work. That is the reason why I usually forget something.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'didn't have make' which is ungrammatical. The present tense 'don't make' fits better with the context. 'Reasons' should be singular 'reason' to match the sentence. 'Usely' is a misspelling of 'usually'. The correction fixes verb tense and spelling errors for clarity.

× As for myself, I didn't like. Making less because I need to spend a lot of time for making that. So I like to remember on my. Rained. What I need to do today when I need to go today?

✓ As for myself, I don't like making lists because I need to spend a lot of time making them. So I prefer to remember what I need to do today in my mind.

The original sentence has fragmented and incorrect verb forms. 'Didn't like' should be 'don't like' to match the present context. 'Making less' should be 'making lists'. 'For making that' is incorrect; 'making them' is better. 'Remember on my. Rained.' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'remember in my mind'. The correction improves verb forms and sentence coherence.

× If I make a list, I will make that on my iPhone. Because it is really convenient for myself. I can. Make a list everywhere every time I need. In.

✓ If I make a list, I will make it on my iPhone because it is really convenient for me. I can make a list anywhere, anytime I need.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has sentence fragments. 'Make that on my iPhone' is better as 'make it on my iPhone'. 'Convenient for myself' should be 'convenient for me'. 'Everywhere every time I need. In.' is fragmented and unclear; corrected to 'anywhere, anytime I need'. The correction improves preposition use and sentence flow.