List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，如将“make a plane clearly”改为“plan clearly”，并注意拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me plan clearly and saves time. It also ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议使用更简洁的句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting my work. It helps me organize tasks and saves time, so it definitely works well for me.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达原因，并使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

예시: Some people find making lists boring or think it wastes time. However, I believe that spending time making a list can actually save time later.

제안: 回答中有很多语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达偏好和原因，避免重复和不连贯。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I like writing by hand. It is easier for me to see and check off tasks when I finish them.

× I often make a list well before I go shopping because I think it can make me make a plane clearly and it can see my time with my soap.

✓ I often make a list well before I go shopping because I think it can help me make a plan clearly and save my time with my shopping.

原句中“make a plane”应为“make a plan”，且“it can see my time with my soap”表达不清，应改为“save my time with my shopping”，动词搭配错误，需使用动词短语。

× And if I do it, I can make sure that I will buy.

✓ And if I do it, I can make sure that I will buy what I need.

原句中“make sure that I will buy”表达不完整，缺少宾语，需补充“what I need”使句子完整。

× before I will start my work at day, I often make a list for all our work from my work, such as I will plan what to do, how to do and I think it saves my time.

✓ Before I start my work during the day, I often make a list of all my tasks, such as planning what to do and how to do it, and I think it saves my time.

“before I will start”中不应使用将来时，改为一般现在时“before I start”；“all our work from my work”表达混乱，改为“all my tasks”；“such as I will plan”应改为“such as planning”，保持时态和结构一致。

× Because I think many people would think is a boring things over the people may think it's a thing that will waste their time, but I don't think so.

✓ Because I think many people would think it is a boring thing or they may think it's something that will waste their time, but I don't think so.

“a boring things”中“things”应为单数“thing”；句子结构混乱，需调整为“it is a boring thing or they may think it's something”。

× I think if you spend time making list, it will say more time when.

✓ I think if you spend time making a list, it will save more time later.

“making list”缺少冠词，应为“making a list”；“it will say more time when”表达错误，应为“it will save more time later”。

× I prefer make lists on paper because I I'm like writing something on paper.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because I like writing something on paper.

“I I'm like”重复且错误，应改为“I like”；“prefer make”应为“prefer to make”，动词不定式用法。

× And I think it's why re directly from direct for me to see it.

✓ And I think it's more direct for me to see it.

原句结构混乱，“why re directly from direct”无意义，需简化为“it's more direct for me to see it”。

× And when I finished one I can I can. Console.

✓ And when I finish one, I can check it off.

“I can I can. Console.”无意义且重复，应改为“I can check it off”，表达完成任务后的动作。