List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I like listening" instead of "I like making lists." Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence by using linking words. Try to be more concise and precise in your explanation.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list, either on my phone or on paper. It helps me remember everything I need and compare prices at different stores, so I can choose the best deal.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "helps me a lot to improving myself." Use linking words to improve flow and be more specific about how the list helps you succeed at work.

예시: Yes, at work I make a list of all my tasks and duties. At the end of the day, I review the list to ensure everything is done. This practice helps me stay organized and improve my performance.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, provide more specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: I'm not sure, but some people might find lists overwhelming because they see many tasks at once. Others may prefer to remember things mentally instead of writing them down.

제안: Your answer has some repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words. Also, avoid filler phrases like "I think" at the end and be more concise.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always available and allows me to search easily. However, sometimes I use paper lists when I want to write things down quickly.

× I like making list even if it's in my phone or on the paper.

✓ I like making lists even if they're in my phone or on paper.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the speaker refers to making multiple lists. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with the plural noun 'lists'. Additionally, 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper' for natural usage.

× I like listening because it helps me to buy everything that I want and even compare the price of different places and then decide to buy the better one.

✓ I like making lists because they help me buy everything that I want, compare the prices at different places, and then decide to buy the better one.

The original sentence uses 'listening' incorrectly; it should be 'making lists'. Also, 'compare the price of different places' should be 'compare the prices at different places' for correct preposition and plural form.

× In my work place also I try to list all of my jobs and all of my duties and at the end of the work time I will check all of the information that I decided to do and it helps me a lot to improving myself and become successful in my job.

✓ In my workplace, I also try to list all of my jobs and duties, and at the end of the workday, I check all the tasks I decided to do. It helps me a lot to improve myself and become successful in my job.

The word 'work place' should be 'workplace' as one word. 'Work time' is better as 'workday'. 'Information that I decided to do' is incorrect; 'tasks I decided to do' is more appropriate. 'Helps me a lot to improving' should be 'helps me a lot to improve'.

× I'm not sure, but I think making this may be a scare them from doing all of the tasks that they write down on the paper.

✓ I'm not sure, but I think making lists may scare them from doing all the tasks they write down on paper.

'Making this may be a scare them' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists may scare them'. Also, 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper'. The pronoun usage is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Or maybe they forgot everything and they can list everything on their mind.

✓ Or maybe they forget everything and keep everything in their mind.

'Forgot' is past tense but the context suggests a general statement, so 'forget' (present tense) is better. Also, 'list everything on their mind' is unnatural; 'keep everything in their mind' is more appropriate.

× Honestly both of them, but most of the time I like to making list on my phone because it's always available and it's a.

✓ Honestly, both of them, but most of the time I like making lists on my phone because it's always available.

'Like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'like making'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and it's a.' which is incomplete and removed for clarity.

× It is very clear and easier to find everything in.

✓ It is very clear and easier to find everything in it.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'in it' clarifies the meaning. 'It is very clear and easier to find everything in it' is grammatically correct.