List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数，避免重复表达，并且用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: It depends on how many things I need to buy. If I have a long shopping list, I usually make a list to avoid forgetting anything. However, if I just want to buy a few items freely, I don't make a list because I prefer to shop spontaneously.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议先明确回答问题，然后用完整句子说明原因，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I don't make lists for work because I am a student. However, I often make lists when I start studying new topics because I think it helps me organize my tasks better.

제안: 表达不清晰，语法错误严重，逻辑混乱。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，避免使用不准确的词汇，清楚说明原因。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because of their personality. For example, some people prefer to be spontaneous and find lists restrictive.

제안: 回答基本清楚，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，使用连词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone. Although I used to write lists on paper in high school, now that I have a smartphone at university, I find it more convenient to use digital lists.

× Just depends on how much thing I would buy.

✓ Just depends on how many things I would buy.

这里的thing应该用复数形式things，因为表示数量时需要用复数。

× If I want to buy a lot of things I may make a list be cause and I forgot something I should buy.

✓ If I want to buy a lot of things, I may make a list because I might forget something I should buy.

原句中because拼写错误且连接词使用不当，且句子缺少逗号分隔条件状语。

× But if I want to buy something freely I didn't.

✓ But if I want to buy something freely, I don't.

这里时态和代词使用错误，应该用现在时态的否定形式don't。

× I don't make a this 'cause I don't want to be controlled.

✓ I don't make this because I don't want to be controlled.

这里的a this是不正确的，this前不需要冠词a。

× Now I'm not a worker because I'm a student.

✓ Now I'm not a worker because I'm a student.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× I. Often make a list when I started studying something because it I think it can make me even better.

✓ I often make a list when I start studying something because I think it can make me even better.

这里时态不一致，started应改为start以保持一般现在时。

× I think that's because their personality, you know, people has MBTI and the people.

✓ I think that's because of their personality, you know, people have MBTI and the people.

people是复数，谓语动词应使用have而非has。

× Uh tend to like making a live while the. Uh, people didn't like you make a list.

✓ Uh, tend to like making a list while other people don't like to make a list.

live应为list，且时态和代词使用错误，didn't应改为don't，you应改为to。

× Well, I prefer to. Make a list in my phone.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone.

在表示使用电子设备时，应该用介词on而不是in。

× Uh, although when I'm in high school I usually make a make a list by paper, but after I'm in university I have a phone so I can use it.

✓ Uh, although when I was in high school I usually made a list on paper, but after I entered university I had a phone so I could use it.

时态应与过去时间点一致，make a list by paper应改为made a list on paper，且介词应为on。