List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构的完整性，同时避免断句不连贯。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Moreover, it prevents me from making impulse purchases and keeps me within my budget.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“make less”应为“make lists”，建议加强语法基础，使用恰当词汇，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, I always make lists for my work because it helps me save time by focusing on important tasks. Also, it allows me to review and prepare better, which makes my work more efficient.

제안: 回答内容不清晰且有语法错误，建议提前准备相关话题的表达，注意句子完整和逻辑性，避免使用不明确的词汇。

예시: I'm not sure, but maybe some people don't like making lists because they have fewer tasks to organize. Personally, I prefer to keep things organized, but I understand that others might find it unnecessary.

제안: 回答中表达较为口语化且有重复词汇，建议使用更正式和连贯的表达，避免重复和不雅用语。

예시: Personally, I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone. Writing things down helps me remember better, and I don't have to worry about accidentally deleting the list like I might on my phone.

× I always making list before I went to shopping because that's more easier for me to remember what items I have to buy or would I need it and also it helps me to avoid.

✓ I always make a list before I go shopping because it's easier for me to remember what items I have to buy or might need, and it also helps me avoid impulse buying other stuff and lets me limit myself to my own budget.

动词后面不应该直接加 -ing 形式，除非是进行时态或动名词，这里应使用一般现在时的动词原形“make”。

× I always making list before I went to shopping because that's more easier for me to remember what items I have to buy or would I need it and also it helps me to avoid.

✓ I always make a list before I go shopping because it's easier for me to remember what items I have to buy or might need, and it also helps me avoid impulse buying other stuff and lets me limit myself to my own budget.

句中“went to shopping”时态不一致，应使用一般现在时“go shopping”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× I always making list before I went to shopping because that's more easier for me to remember what items I have to buy or would I need it and also it helps me to avoid.

✓ I always make a list before I go shopping because it's easier for me to remember what items I have to buy or might need, and it also helps me avoid impulse buying other stuff and lets me limit myself to my own budget.

“more easier”是错误的比较级用法，形容词“easy”的比较级是“easier”，不需要加“more”。

× I always making list before I went to shopping because that's more easier for me to remember what items I have to buy or would I need it and also it helps me to avoid. My impulse. Buying other stuff and can let me to just limited in my own buggage.

✓ I always make a list before I go shopping because it's easier for me to remember what items I have to buy or might need, and it also helps me avoid impulse buying other stuff and lets me limit myself to my own budget.

“went to shopping”中“to”不应出现，正确表达是“go shopping”。

× and can let me to just limited in my own buggage.

✓ and lets me limit myself to my own budget.

“let me to just limited”中“to”不应出现，且“limited”应为动词原形“limit”，同时“buggage”拼写错误，应为“budget”。

× I also always make less for my work because I think I can also to let me save more time to work on what I have to do.

✓ I also always make lists for my work because I think it helps me save more time to work on what I have to do.

“make less”应为“make lists”，因为“list”是可数名词，且此处应使用复数形式。

× I think I can also to let me save more time to work on what I have to do.

✓ I think it also helps me save more time to work on what I have to do.

“can also to let me”结构不正确，应简化为“it helps me”，去掉多余的“to”。

× And also I can have more time to reviewing the work and also to prepare for the work.

✓ And also I can have more time to review the work and to prepare for it.

“to reviewing”中“to”后应接动词原形，故应为“to review”。

× And also I can have more time to reviewing the work and also to prepare for the work.

✓ And also I can have more time to review the work and to prepare for it.

避免重复使用“the work”，用代词“it”替代更自然。

× So I think to make a list before I work that's really practical.

✓ So I think making a list before I work is really practical.

“to make a list before I work”作为主语时应使用动名词形式“making”，且句子缺少谓语动词。

× Probably they don't have to organize many tasks.

✓ Probably they don't have many tasks to organize.

“have to organize many tasks”表达不自然，应调整为“have many tasks to organize”。

× But I know that my MBTS I ask ask J, so I'm not gonna be really. Obsessed with organized my all of the items in my life.

✓ But I know that my MBTI is ISFJ, so I'm not going to be really obsessed with organizing all the items in my life.

“obsessed with organized”中“organized”应为动名词“organizing”，且“my all of the items”顺序错误，应为“all the items”。

× But I don't really know about them, so that's kind of like weird for me.

✓ But I don't really know about them, so that's kind of weird to me.

“weird for me”更自然的表达是“weird to me”。

× For me personally, my preference is to make a list on paper, not in my phone.

✓ For me personally, my preference is to make a list on paper, not on my phone.

“in my phone”应改为“on my phone”，表示在手机上。

× I think to write it down once, even though you forget to bring the paper with you, that's going to be more easier than.

✓ I think writing it down once, even if you forget to bring the paper with you, is easier than relying on your memory.

“more easier”错误，比较级“easier”前不加“more”。

× Like then your memories, it effects your phone.

✓ Like relying on your memory, it affects your phone.

句子结构混乱，应调整为“Like relying on your memory”并且“effects”应为“affects”。

× If you accidentally delete delete it.

✓ If you accidentally delete it.

重复“delete”是错误，应去掉重复词。

× It's going to be like oh **** like totally forget.

✓ It's going to be like, 'Oh no, I totally forgot.'

句子缺少连贯性和标点，应加引号和适当的表达使其完整。