List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit redundant. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'good for my investments' without explanation.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me prioritize what I need and saves time. For example, I can choose stores that have the best prices, which helps me manage my budget better.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific details using linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'try to do it until the late' and be more precise.

예시: It depends on the day, but usually I make a list of my tasks at work. This helps me remember everything, and if I forget something, I check my list to complete it, even if it means working late.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more naturally and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful. For instance, constantly seeing unfinished tasks can make them anxious and distract them from focusing on their current work.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to organize your response clearly by stating your preference first, then explaining why, using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like 'it feels good' multiple times.

예시: I like both methods for making lists. Sometimes I use my phone because it's convenient, but other times I prefer writing on paper since physically checking off tasks feels satisfying.

× Actually yes, when I want to go for shopping, at least everything that I want and it helps me to prioritize my needs and even choose a better place for shopping.

✓ Actually yes, when I want to go shopping, I list at least everything that I want and it helps me to prioritize my needs and even choose a better place for shopping.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'for'. 'Go' is followed by the verb in -ing form directly when indicating activities like shopping.

× Actually yes, when I want to go for shopping, at least everything that I want and it helps me to prioritize my needs and even choose a better place for shopping.

✓ Actually yes, when I want to go shopping, I list at least everything that I want, and it helps me to prioritize my needs and even choose a better place for shopping.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb in the second clause ('at least everything that I want'). Adding 'I list' clarifies the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× I also take a note when I am at work, I prefer to list all of my duties and at last I check the duties that even I forgot one of them.

✓ I also take notes when I am at work; I prefer to list all of my duties, and at last, I check the duties to see if I have forgotten any of them.

The phrase 'take a note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to making notes in general. Also, 'check the duties that even I forgot one of them' is awkward; rephrasing to 'check the duties to see if I have forgotten any of them' improves clarity and grammar.

× I will try to do it until the late.

✓ I will try to do it until late.

The phrase 'until the late' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'until late' to indicate continuing an action until a late time.

× I think it's because their characteristics, because I think some people believe that making list scared them and they come all the time thinking about the other jobs that they have to do and it can distract them from focusing on their work.

✓ I think it's because of their characteristics, because I think some people believe that making lists scares them and they constantly think about the other jobs that they have to do, which can distract them from focusing on their work.

'Because their characteristics' needs the preposition 'of' to be correct. 'Making list scared them' should be 'making lists scares them' to agree in number and tense. 'They come all the time thinking' is awkward; 'they constantly think' is better. Also, 'it can distract them' should be 'which can distract them' to connect the ideas properly.

× I think it's because their characteristics, because I think some people believe that making list scared them and they come all the time thinking about the other jobs that they have to do and it can distract them from focusing on their work.

✓ I think it's because of their characteristics, because I think some people believe that making lists scares them and they constantly think about the other jobs that they have to do, which can distract them from focusing on their work.

The phrase 'because their characteristics' is missing the preposition 'of' to correctly link the cause and effect.

× I think some people believe that making list scared them

✓ I think some people believe that making lists scares them

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists. Also, the verb 'scared' should be 'scares' to agree with the singular subject 'making lists'.

× And sometimes I like to write notes on my notes in my phone, and sometimes I like the traditional ones and write my notes and mild checklists on the paper because it feels so good and you have to check them and it feels good.

✓ Sometimes I like to write notes on my phone, and sometimes I prefer the traditional way and write my notes and small checklists on paper because it feels so good to check them.

The phrase 'write notes on my notes in my phone' is confusing; it should be 'write notes on my phone'. 'The traditional ones' is vague; 'the traditional way' is clearer. 'Mild checklists' is incorrect; 'small checklists' or 'simple checklists' is better. Also, 'you have to check them and it feels good' is redundant and awkward; simplifying improves clarity.