List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid short, incomplete sentences and connect your ideas smoothly using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me get everything I need and saves time.

제안: Try to speak in complete sentences and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words such as 'because' to explain reasons clearly. Also, be more specific about how making lists helps your work.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and save time by clearly showing what tasks I need to complete and my goals.

제안: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking. Also, explain the reasons more clearly.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel they don't have time to create them and they doubt they will follow the list anyway.

제안: Try to avoid sentence fragments and connect your ideas logically using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, be more concise and natural in your response.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to use and I can access it anywhere, unlike paper lists which I might forget at home.

× Yes, I do make a list when I go for shopping because it helps me. To get whatever I want and it saves my time as well.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because it helps me get whatever I want and saves my time as well.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly uses 'go for shopping'. The phrase 'go shopping' is the correct form. Also, the sentence should be combined properly to avoid fragments, making it clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes, it helps. Me to save my time and this very important to make a list becaused. Your work should be organized and you should know what you have to do and what is your goal.

✓ Yes, it helps me save my time and it is very important to make a list because your work should be organized and you should know what you have to do and what your goal is.

The pronoun 'Me' is incorrectly separated and capitalized. 'Becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be combined properly. Also, 'what is your goal' should be 'what your goal is' for correct word order.

× Some people dislike making list 'cause they don't have time for. Making it and they don't believe that they will stick to that list, they do it by themselves.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they don't have time for making them and they don't believe that they will stick to the list; they do it by themselves.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'some people'. The sentence is fragmented and needs proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'Cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formal correctness. Also, 'making it' should be 'making them' to agree with plural 'lists'.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because it is very easy to operate and wherever I go I can find easily and. Because sometimes I forgot my list at home so. I use my phone.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very easy to operate and wherever I go, I can find them easily. Sometimes I forget my list at home, so I use my phone.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to indicate general preference. The sentence is fragmented and has unnecessary conjunctions. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense. Punctuation and sentence flow need correction for clarity.