List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'when I saw' nên là 'when I shop' và 'buy an' nên là 'buy'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money. Therefore, I usually write it down on a piece of paper.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'it balance' nên là 'it balances' và 'spend much time' nên là 'spend more time'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn để thể hiện ý tưởng một cách hiệu quả.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it balances my daily life and work, so I can spend more time with my family and friends.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự liên kết giữa các ý. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, 'for the one who not. Understand' nên được sửa thành 'for those who do not understand'.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because it can be complicated for those who do not understand what they are doing or what they are going to do.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can be carried anywhere, so it is very convenient and effective.

× Yes, I make a list when I saw because it helps me remember what I need to buy an.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy.

The verb 'saw' is past tense and does not fit the present tense context of the sentence. It should be 'shop' to match the present tense used in the question and the rest of the sentence.

× Keeps me from spending too much money so I usually write it down on the paper.

✓ It keeps me from spending too much money, so I usually write it down on paper.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'It' as the subject and correcting 'on the paper' to 'on paper' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it balance my daily life and work so I could spend much time for my family and my friends.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it balances my daily life and work so I can spend more time with my family and my friends.

The verb 'balance' should be in third person singular form 'balances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'could' should be 'can' to indicate present ability, and 'much time for' should be 'more time with' for correct usage.

× I think they don't like making lists because it could be so complicated for the one who not. Understand what they doing, what they're going to do.

✓ I think they don't like making lists because it can be complicated for those who do not understand what they are doing or what they're going to do.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. Combining the fragments and correcting verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I've referred to make a list on my phone because.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because

The phrase 'I've referred' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I prefer' to express preference in present tense.

× Fan can be carried anywhere, so is very convenient an effectively an.

✓ It can be carried anywhere, so it is very convenient and effective.

'Fan' is likely a typo for 'phone'. Also, pronouns 'it' should be used instead of 'fan', and 'effectively' should be 'effective' as an adjective describing convenience.

× It's not.

✓ It is not.

The sentence fragment 'It's not.' lacks context and is incomplete. It should be connected to the previous sentence or completed to convey a full idea.